In this age of globalization, we get up to date information about all the news all around world via television, internet or newspapers. Even though we are not directly related to that events; I personally believes that we should keep ourselves updated. It will not only provide a global platform for bonding but also will teach us valuable lessons in our life. Additionally it will improve knowledge and technology.
First of all, we can easily form good relationship with people all over the world. by knowing happenings in other countries we relate to people of that country. We will get enough material to chat or debate with the people of other countries. We can be happy in their joys or help them in their difficulties. This will enhance a global relationship between several countries. For instance, when there was a massive earthquake in China in 2010 were thousands of people got killed, people from all over the world came forward to help the tragedy striven people. They provided food, clothing and even prayed for the well being of poor people who got hurt due to such calamity.
In addition to bonding, we can learn invaluable lessons to save our lives. For example, by knowing from the news sources that people in some developing countries are facing the bad effects of pollution; developed countries will plan ahead to overcome pollution problems and use or create certain technologies such as planting enough trees, using clean fuel or electrically operated vehicles or regulations in the factories etc. to combat such problem. Such information can be useful to save health of numerous people.
Furthermore it will increase our knowledge. We can learn about new technological advances in the field of electronics,medicine and in several industries. We can either imply them in our country or can achieve even more progress in these fields. to give an example of certain features of computer developed by one nation are enhanced by computer scientists of other nation which in term help improve the product for every mankind.
Finally, some people might think that news or events happening in other countries are not useful and cannot affect us but in this global community we need to consider each other to gain knowledge, relationship and learn from others mistakes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 206, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'believe'
Suggestion: believe
...ly related to that events; I personally believes that we should keep ourselves updated. ...
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Line 1, column 362, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
... teach us valuable lessons in our life. Additionally it will improve knowledge and technolog...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: By
...ionship with people all over the world. by knowing happenings in other countries w...
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Line 3, column 553, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to people'
Suggestion: to people
...ame forward to help the tragedy striven people. They provided food, clothing and even ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...l to save health of numerous people. Furthermore it will increase our knowledge. We can ...
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Line 7, column 118, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , medicine
...cal advances in the field of electronics,medicine and in several industries. We can eithe...
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Line 7, column 246, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
...eve even more progress in these fields. to give an example of certain features of ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1917.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 379.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0580474934 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82464886238 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554089709763 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.039989339 48.9658058833 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.85 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.95 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105288296946 0.236089414692 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0348977292614 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0256282603735 0.0737576698707 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0605232525536 0.150856017488 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313604226968 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.