With the fast develop of technology, our life is far more complex than the past. Many people concerned about our young people, and worried about their performance in this modern world. Many people think that young people should have the ability to plan and organise, and I personally agree with this view. I would like to support this opinion by these following reasons.
The first reason is that young people will be more competitive in job market when they can make good plans and knows how to organise them. When people make a list about the things they should do, rather than straightly go ahead, they can finish them more efficiently. For example, an effective programmer will make a to-do list before writing codes. Since they think carefully about each step they should do, they will have less probability to make mistakes during this process. As a result, they can finish their job more clearly and wisely, of course, bosses will appreciate employees who is able to finish their tasks in a short time, so that those kinds of employees will have high chance to get promotion and thus they are more competitive than the average.
Furthermore, plans makes people's life more enjoyable. Nowadays, most people suffer from great pressure during their life, so that everyone needs good relaxation to reduce stress. If people have a plan in their life, they can achieve the balance between work and relax. For instance, a good vocation plan with family is benefit for the relationships between parents and children. When people gain more happiness in life, they can be more motivated in their job.
Finally, saving money is another benefit of planning. When people have a plan of what is they really need before they go shopping, they will have a higher probability to not spend money on the things they do not need, as a consequence, it helps people reduce their budget. If someone goes to the shopping center and buy all the things which are attractive but not necessary, obviously he wasted a lot of money.
In conclusion, regarding to all of these benefits, having the ability to plan and organize not only make people competitive in market, but also improve people's life quality and reduce people's budget on unnecessary things.
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'really', 'regarding', 'so', 'thus', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'of course', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.234042553191 0.229887763892 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.1536643026 0.158761421928 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0732860520095 0.0866891130778 85% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0614657210402 0.046263068375 133% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0685579196217 0.0685040099705 100% => OK
Prepositions: 0.115839243499 0.118717715034 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0189125295508 0.0351676179071 54% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.42296263331 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0260047281324 0.0309702414327 84% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0780141843972 0.0887237588012 88% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0354609929078 0.0209618222197 169% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0189125295508 0.0139019557991 136% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2239.0 2387.08602151 94% => OK
No of words: 380.0 408.028673835 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.89210526316 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.339473684211 0.338922669872 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.215789473684 0.251872472559 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.134210526316 0.174417080927 77% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.102631578947 0.112833075102 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42296263331 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518421052632 0.524397521467 99% => OK
Word variations: 56.6280302818 59.2087087015 96% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.1111111111 20.5533526081 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1475551877 48.84282405 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.388888889 120.699889404 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 20.5533526081 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.833333333333 0.644075263715 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 42.6900584795 45.7405998639 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.3 1.45489161554 89% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340700281464 0.300154397459 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.113873282465 0.103427244359 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0818503657372 0.0752933317313 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.526488408684 0.497263757937 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.17842640771 0.151897553556 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129275466732 0.114077575197 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708980743952 0.0781384742642 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.241150375576 0.336927656856 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0440338037535 0.067059652881 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222532935659 0.210909579961 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591826696848 0.0618886996521 96% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 14.0 8.42114695341 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.