Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
There have endless discussion over factors/considerations that everyone takes into account in a relationship. Some people argue that telling the truth is most important factor contributing to a relationship. Personally, I approve of this argument.
First and foremost, what I put in my priority is relationship enhancement. It cannot be denied that honesty plan and nurture truth which makes relationship last long. Telling the truth indicates respect and sincerity among people in a relationship. Only if a person finds someone reliable, s/he wants to make friend with him/her. Trust is basic foundation of a long term relationship. When truth is built up, people are able to help each other without hesitation. Thereby, relationship is likely to flourish. On the contrary, relationship without mutual believing is fragile. In any relationship of mine, if I find out that a person lie to me, no longer I trust this person and this relationship is hardly to be continued . Indeed, honesty is very important in relationship, not because of its contribution to relationship strength but also due to without it, relationship will over.
Secondly, personal enjoyment is undoubtedly paramount of importance. It is apparent that telling the truth brings people the feeling of comfort. The fact is that honesty takes more supports from society than dishonesty. Telling the lies is considered as a bad behavior that people are discouraged to do. Therefore, if someone is liar, s/he will suffer a lot of feeling of guilty. This causes pressure and make s/he always worried about one day her/his lies are discovered. Only being honesty can this stressful situation be terminated. For instance, when I was kid, I lied my mother about my bad academic result. Then I always felt guilty, scared and shame about what I did. Finally, I told the truth with my mom and after that, although I was punished, I feel relieved and happy. By and large, telling the truth offers people happiness.
Last but not least, some people might think that telling the truth is not always rewarding. In fact there are some cases that telling the lies is more suitable, for example a doctor should not tell patients about their hopeless situation. However, this is not a necessary case. After certain time, the truth will be no longer hidden. And when it is uncovered, the situation is likely to be worse than what we initially expected. With the case of patient who is about to dead due to his disease, if he/she knew about his/her health status earlier, he/she would have arranged something. Thus, the truth should be respected at any circumstance. Beyond any doubts, it is suggested that people should be honest with others.
In conclusion, truth enhancement and personal enjoyment are convincing reasons for my approval. It is highly recommended that people should take my writing into carefully consideration to have an appropriate decision on choosing factor priority in relationship.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in fact, by and large, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 36.0 15.1003584229 238% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2484.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 482.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15352697095 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99592002239 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520746887967 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 765.9 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.6003584229 165% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3082489238 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0588235294 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1764705882 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08823529412 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0189284743471 0.236089414692 8% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00525165171491 0.076458572812 7% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.01711994864 0.0737576698707 23% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0136664437606 0.150856017488 9% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0134665205875 0.0645574589148 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Try to use less pronouns (like 'It, I, They, We, You...') as the subject of a sentence.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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