What do you want most in a friend—someone who is intelligent, someone
who has a sense of humor, or someone who is reliable? Which one of these
characteristics is most important to you? Use reasons and specific examples
to explain your choice.
Who to choose a friend? Interesting question. People have different criteria in selecting a friend. Or even when to consider a specific person a friend. In my opinion, the most important treat that I look for in a friend is the reliability. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in this article.
To begin with, a friend for me is a person who I can depend on him to support my back or to help me if I got in a trouble. A reliable person off course have such treats. Moreover, What I wait from my friends is the same what I will give them. I expect them to stand next to me to solve any problems in the life that may face me. such as emotional, family or money-related problems. My friendship with Malik Smadi is a good example of this. Once upon a time, we were in a vacation in Turkey. I lost my wallet and all my money was inside it. What Malik did. without asking him, He opened his wallet and gave me the half of the money he had. This what I call real friend.
Secondly, A real friend is a person that I can talk to him about any matter or I can tell him my secrets with worrying that he may tell anybody about it. In the same time i believe that a good friend will advice me about what to do to solve any problem. A reliable friend will do that for sure. Again my friendship with malik is an example of that. I got very low average at the end of the first year at the university. And I received a warning letter from the admission and registration unit indicated that I will be fired if I don not get the required marks. Malik supported me and told me that I can get a high marks. He also spent a lot of time teaching me math and other courses. Without him I was not going to able to continue my undergraduate program.
To sum it up, A reliability is the most important treat in a friend. This because a reliable friend will stand next to his friends and support them in their lives to solve any trouble that they may get into.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Without
...my money was inside it. What Malik did. without asking him, He opened his wallet and ga...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...tell anybody about it. In the same time i believe that a good friend will advice ...
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Message: Did you mean 'advise' (a verb)?
Suggestion: advise
... time i believe that a good friend will advice me about what to do to solve any proble...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...year at the university. And I received a warning letter from the admission and re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, i feel, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 72.0 43.0788530466 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 385.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.08831168831 4.8611393121 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39845342872 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475324675325 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 502.2 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.825512581 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.2962962963 100.406767564 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.2592592593 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130165560608 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448110712628 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561654777492 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105827108787 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501056827522 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.0 11.7677419355 42% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 58.1214874552 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.1575268817 51% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.85 10.9000537634 54% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.55 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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