what kind of class is better ?? online class or tradition class
Generally speaking, it is noble established that in today's vital universe we exist in, where have good education is very important, it's a secure clause to suppose that have a standard class and true program are paramount, However, create standard class, has been a caption of great and deep controversy including academicians and ordinary people alike.
In parallel, there is a rather popular opinion on the issue stating that what kind of class is better for education online class or traditional class I, to the contrary, repudiate this idea traditional class is better than online class
In what follows, the rationale behind this thesis will be elucidated by focusing on 3 reasons.
One imperative reason coming to mind at first is the social aspect. Although the online class decrease waste the time and remove long way, but at the traditional class people can talk with he/his friends after class and solve problem each other every session and they can make friend together .so, they will increase social skill and will learn lesson together and their grade will be able to increase efficiently .according to a recent yet impactful research, conducted at the Asian continent, it is found that major of people believe traditional class is more satisfactory than online class, because people parents believe at the school children can learn better by interaction with their friend they can learn better .
The second interested point which deserves some words here is, that if one person uses online class, one person will not be healthy these days doctors can find evidence about using computer for a long time such as: backache, overweight ,and so on but if one person goes to the school, university, and class one person will walk and exercise and will be able to watch their weight so, in addition, their mind will be healthy than person use online class .An older proverb of Iran say to us if one person puts the water in a glass for a long time the water ruin and anybody cannot use this water but water in river always is fresh and this similar traditional class and online class.
At the final point, I think even thought the online class help to save your energy for doing plenty of works, but one person would like to attend this class must have both advanced equipment and high-speed internet, because maybe they lose part of the class. However, both of them must pay money for their class but if one person uses the traditional class, only pay money for a taxi, bus, or subway and older proverb says: money doesn’t grow on trees they can save money. Although this money is low, an older proverb says to drop by drop fill the tube.
In summary, in this essay, we imply on social benefit and health benefit as well as the financial benefit of the traditional class.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, so, well, i think, in addition, in summary, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2317.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 481.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81704781705 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68313059816 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3511753478 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515592515593 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 718.2 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.1344086022 263% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 215.528291517 48.9658058833 440% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 257.444444444 100.406767564 256% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.4444444444 20.6045352989 259% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.2222222222 5.45110844103 224% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.503614940031 0.236089414692 213% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.215938533319 0.076458572812 282% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.189084723658 0.0737576698707 256% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267666273268 0.150856017488 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.216110530646 0.0645574589148 335% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.0 11.7677419355 238% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 58.1214874552 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 10.1575268817 224% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 10.002688172 305% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.0537634409 231% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 23.0 10.247311828 224% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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