Lyric :))

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Lyric :))

What would I do without your smart mouth?
Drawing me in, and you kicking me out
You've got my head spinning, no kidding, I can't pin you down
What's going on in that beautiful mind
I'm on your magical mystery ride
And I'm so dizzy, don't know what hit me, but I'll be alright
My head's under water
But I'm breathing fine
You're crazy and I'm out of my mind
'Cause all of me
Loves all of you
Love your curves and all your edges
All your perfect imperfections
Give your all to me
I'll give my all to you
You're my end and my beginning
Even when I lose I'm winning
'Cause I give you all of me
And you give me all of you, oh oh
How many times do I have to tell you
Even when you're crying you're beautiful too
The world is beating you down, I'm around through every mood
You're my downfall, you're my muse
My worst distraction, my rhythm and blues
I can't stop singing, it's ringing, in my head for you
My head's under water
But I'm breathing fine
You're crazy and I'm out of my mind

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Average: 0.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: You've
... Drawing me in, and you kicking me out Youve got my head spinning, no kidding, I can...
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Line 3, column 43, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...uve got my head spinning, no kidding, I cant pin you down Whats going on in that be...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...nning, no kidding, I cant pin you down Whats going on in that beautiful mind Im on ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... Whats going on in that beautiful mind Im on your magical mystery ride And Im so...
^^
Line 6, column 5, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...d Im on your magical mystery ride And Im so dizzy, dont know what hit me, but Il...
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Line 6, column 18, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... magical mystery ride And Im so dizzy, dont know what hit me, but Ill be alright M...
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Line 6, column 45, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...Im so dizzy, dont know what hit me, but Ill be alright My heads under water But I...
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Line 8, column 5, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...l be alright My heads under water But Im breathing fine Youre crazy and Im out ...
^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: You're
...ads under water But Im breathing fine Youre crazy and Im out of my mind Cause all ...
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Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... But Im breathing fine Youre crazy and Im out of my mind Cause all of me Loves ...
^^
Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...ect imperfections Give your all to me Ill give my all to you Youre my end and my...
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Line 16, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: You're
...your all to me Ill give my all to you Youre my end and my beginning Even when I lo...
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Line 17, column 18, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... end and my beginning Even when I lose Im winning Cause I give you all of me An...
^^
Line 19, column 29, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: oh
... all of me And you give me all of you, oh oh How many times do I have to tell you ...
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Line 21, column 11, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
... times do I have to tell you Even when youre crying youre beautiful too The world i...
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Line 21, column 24, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...ave to tell you Even when youre crying youre beautiful too The world is beating you...
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Line 22, column 32, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ful too The world is beating you down, Im around through every mood Youre my dow...
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Line 23, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: You're
...you down, Im around through every mood Youre my downfall, youre my muse My worst di...
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Line 23, column 20, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
... through every mood Youre my downfall, youre my muse My worst distraction, my rhyth...
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Line 25, column 3, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...rst distraction, my rhythm and blues I cant stop singing, its ringing, in my head f...
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Line 27, column 5, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...head for you My heads under water But Im breathing fine Youre crazy and Im out ...
^^
Line 28, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: You're
...ads under water But Im breathing fine Youre crazy and Im out of my mind
^^^^^
Line 28, column 17, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... But Im breathing fine Youre crazy and Im out of my mind
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 10.4613686534 19% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 12.0772626932 25% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 22.412803532 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 30.3222958057 73% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 1373.03311258 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 195.0 270.72406181 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.17435897436 5.08290768461 82% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 4.04702891845 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.02486840182 2.5805825403 78% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 145.348785872 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507692307692 0.540411800872 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 235.8 419.366225166 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.55342163355 77% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 2.0 0.116997792494 1709% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.51434878587 396% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 13.0662251656 15% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 97.0 21.2450331126 457% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 447.5 49.2860985944 908% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 407.0 110.228320801 369% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 97.5 21.698381199 449% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06452816374 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 25.0 4.09492273731 611% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 23.0 4.19205298013 549% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 47.0 13.3589403974 352% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 6.86 53.8541721854 13% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 5.55761589404 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 36.4 11.0289183223 330% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 8.09 12.2367328918 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.42419426049 120% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 63.6247240618 33% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.0 10.7273730684 242% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 40.8 10.498013245 389% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 11.2008830022 232% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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