TPO 01 -Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is obvious that universities and colleges have a prominent role in shaping students' future career. Considering the fact that the budget of universities remains limited, some people believe that classes are more important than sports and social activities and hence, they need to receive more financial support. Others may hold opposite opinion claiming that extracurricular activities deserve to be expensed equal amount of money regarding academic classes. From my point of view, I believe that the latter carry more weight. In this essay, I will explain specific reasons according to which I think are the most well-known viewpoints among people.
To begin with, it is a well-established fact that sports can help up to improve our physical as well as mental health significantly. Since we are talking about sports in a university context, we need to take into account what benefits do university sports offer to students. From a student's perspective, studying incessantly can be frustrating and overwhelming. So, students need to have fun in order to get refreshed. Doing sports make them feel revived. To illustrate, as a university student at Iran University of Science and Technology back in 2000, I was majoring in software engineering. There was a nice tennis court in vicinity of the stadium located at the north corner of the university campus. Some students including one of close my friends, Sara, often played tennis at that court. I always thought that it was a waste of time while we could spend more time on studying instead of playing tennis. But, it was totally wrong. With Sara's suggestion, I decided to go about playing tennis at that court twice a week after my classes. Soon, I found it very interesting to do. After a while, I felt so fresh. Besides, I was able to cope with difficult situations I was faced with more efficiently. In addition, my capabilities in problem-solving regarding my major were increased considerably which led to better scores. As you can see, university sports helped me to be more successful student and augmented my liveliness and youthfulness.
Next, students can take advantage of participating in social activities to get rid of likely negative effects of studying constantly such as tiredness and exhaustion. One of the best forms of these kinds of activities is to join clubs. As such, you have a good chance to meet other students majoring different fields and converse with them. I think that these acquaintances might lead to new friendships. For example, at the university where I was studying years ago, I joined an English club which its members were the ones from different schools. We had a great time collecting around a table and discussing about current events occurring in campus using English language. This motivated me to continue practicing speaking English on a daily basis. In addition, I met some cool guys in that club and we have been in contact with each other since then. Some of them have turned into my close friends. As a result, joining that club gave me an opportunity to be familiar with whom I had common interests with them and we ended up being close friends.
To sum up, life is not sitting behind a desk and studying. Soon, Students will be graduated from universities and will encounter wide variety facets of real life. Being engaged in social activities teach them how to commune better with people and doing sports help them to get stronger, healthier, and stay focused in order to face future more efficiently.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 282, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...ersity sports offer to students. From a students perspective, studying incessantly can b...
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'but', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'regarding', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'while', 'as to', 'for example', 'i think', 'in addition', 'such as', 'talking about', 'as a result', 'as well as', 'to begin with', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.218461538462 0.261695866417 83% => OK
Verbs: 0.190769230769 0.158904122519 120% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0892307692308 0.0723426182421 123% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0415384615385 0.0435111971325 95% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0723076923077 0.0277247811725 261% => OK
Prepositions: 0.129230769231 0.128828473217 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0676923076923 0.0370669169778 183% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.87402059314 2.5805825403 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0384615384615 0.0208969081088 184% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00461538461538 0.00154638098197 298% => OK
Determiners: 0.06 0.128158765124 47% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0153846153846 0.0158828679856 97% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0107692307692 0.0114777025283 94% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3509.0 1645.83664459 213% => OK
No of words: 587.0 271.125827815 217% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.97785349233 6.08160592843 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9222030514 4.04852973271 122% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.354344122658 0.374372842146 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.272572402044 0.287516216867 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.195911413969 0.187439937562 105% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.127768313458 0.113142543107 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87402059314 2.5805825403 111% => OK
Unique words: 313.0 145.348785872 215% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533219761499 0.539623497131 99% => OK
Word variations: 67.7678614405 53.8517498576 126% => OK
How many sentences: 34.0 13.0529801325 260% => Less sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 17.2647058824 21.7502111507 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3310622429 49.3711431718 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.205882353 132.220823453 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2647058824 21.7502111507 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.588235294118 0.878197800319 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.39072847682 29% => OK
Readability: 44.5219460868 50.5018328374 88% => OK
Elegance: 1.36363636364 1.90840788429 71% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343141315232 0.549887131256 62% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0699566116408 0.142949733639 49% => Sentence sentence coherence is low.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0640775858875 0.0787303798458 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.349872694688 0.631733273073 55% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.13035846546 0.139662658121 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0971819156934 0.266732575781 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588507688051 0.103435571967 57% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.36578927296 0.414875509568 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0642828891916 0.0530846634433 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241820042565 0.40443939384 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504852281396 0.0528353158467 96% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 4.33554083885 507% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.26048565121 188% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 10.0 3.49668874172 286% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.62251655629 83% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 3.1766004415 157% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 10.2958057395 175% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Less content wanted. Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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