TPO-08 - Integrated Writing Task Toward the end of his life, the Chevalier de Seingalt (1725-1798) wrote a long memoir recounting his life and adventures. The Chevalier was a somewhat controversial figure, but since he met many famous people, including ki

The passage tells that the stories about Chevalier in his memoir are not true as there are various theories that have come across recently that question the authenticity of memoir written by him. However, the speaker cast doubt on the theories presented by the reader and give explanation for doing so.

First, the passage says that the Chevalier was not as rich as pictured in the memoir because there are proofs of him borrowing money from Swiss merchant. The professor contraindicates this point and says that it is true that when Chevalier was living in Switzerland, he was rich and used to spend huge amounts of cash on gambling and parties but he had property that had to be sold to get cash. So, meanwhile he borrowed money from merchant and was waiting to get cash from his sold property.

Second, the passage states that conversation between him and famous writer Voltaire cannot be accurate as it was written much later and the conversation had held many years earlier. On the contrary, the lecturer refutes the matter and argues that Chevalier used to write down all his conversations with Voltaire each night. Also, there are witnesses who have agreed to it and confessed that he used to refer his notes regularly while writing.

Third, the passage claims that the story of Chevalier’s escape from Venice’s prison is not true, he must have bribed the jailer to get free indeed. Conversely, the lecturer oppose the point and asserts that there were many of his friends in jail with him who were more influential than him but still they could not get free. In fact soon after the escape of Chevalier, jailer mended the ceiling of that prison. Therefore, this proves that whatever is written in the memoir is true.

Votes
Average: 8.3 (1 vote)
Essay Categories

Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'conversely', 'first', 'however', 'second', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'therefore', 'third', 'while', 'in fact', 'it is true', 'on the contrary']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.211480362538 0.261695866417 81% => OK
Verbs: 0.199395770393 0.158904122519 125% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0513595166163 0.0723426182421 71% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0634441087613 0.0435111971325 146% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0574018126888 0.0277247811725 207% => OK
Prepositions: 0.135951661631 0.128828473217 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0543806646526 0.0370669169778 147% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.54496299167 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.02416918429 0.0208969081088 116% => OK
Particles: 0.00302114803625 0.00154638098197 195% => OK
Determiners: 0.0876132930514 0.128158765124 68% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00906344410876 0.0158828679856 57% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0181268882175 0.0114777025283 158% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1742.0 1645.83664459 106% => OK
No of words: 298.0 271.125827815 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.84563758389 6.08160592843 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.04852973271 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.318791946309 0.374372842146 85% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.224832214765 0.287516216867 78% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.151006711409 0.187439937562 81% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0906040268456 0.113142543107 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54496299167 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 145.348785872 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530201342282 0.539623497131 98% => OK
Word variations: 53.9520144477 53.8517498576 100% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0529801325 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.8333333333 21.7502111507 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7118084615 49.3711431718 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.166666667 132.220823453 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 21.7502111507 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.25 0.878197800319 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.39072847682 0% => OK
Readability: 47.3165548098 50.5018328374 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.25471698113 1.90840788429 66% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.746956410277 0.549887131256 136% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.138739188189 0.142949733639 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0703700885931 0.0787303798458 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.621950602459 0.631733273073 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.105441886239 0.139662658121 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.353979261173 0.266732575781 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101679819853 0.103435571967 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.341647202278 0.414875509568 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0384683107775 0.0530846634433 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.542850349291 0.40443939384 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427339710801 0.0528353158467 81% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.26048565121 47% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.49668874172 57% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 3.62251655629 166% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.1766004415 31% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.2958057395 87% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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