TPO-11 - Integrated Writing Task A recent study reveals that people especially young people are reading far less literature,novels, plays, and poems,than they used to. This is troubling because the trend has unfortunate effects for the reading public, for

The lecture says reading less literature does not lead to bad effects certainly. The reasons have been explained in lecture are in contradiction with mentioned points in reading.

First, people replace literature books with the other subjects like history, comic and so on which can motivate people to enhance their imaginations, empathy and language knowledge as literature texts. So literature books are not unique in giving benefits to people encouraging them to imagine and empathize.

Second, it is a wrong theory that decreasing literature books reading has bad effect on culture. Nowadays, people are being flourished in field of culture by listening music or watching television or read a web page. In fact culture has been developed in some aspects which did not exist in past years and these entertaining activities are not just for fun in modern life and they have strong relationship with cultural perspectives.

Finally, the main reason for decline in reading literature is writers which led to lack of audiences. Modern writers with their complex works have made people uninterested to literature and they do not pay attention to a reader's need and demand. So if writers try to attract people with giving respect to their interests, audiences will give their hug to the old cultural product of human civilization.

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Average: 8.8 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, so, in fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 12.0772626932 33% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 22.412803532 45% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 30.3222958057 109% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1123.0 1373.03311258 82% => OK
No of words: 214.0 270.72406181 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2476635514 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8244136434 2.5805825403 109% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 145.348785872 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616822429907 0.540411800872 114% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 419.366225166 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2068999139 49.2860985944 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.3 110.228320801 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 21.698381199 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 7.06452816374 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353140983664 0.272083759551 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146651097043 0.0996497079465 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718741772526 0.0662205650399 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209279653881 0.162205337803 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238718247133 0.0443174109184 54% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.3589403974 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.8541721854 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.0289183223 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.2367328918 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 63.6247240618 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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