TPO-22 - Integrated Writing Task Ethanol fuel, made from plants such as corn and sugar cane, has been advocated by some people as an alternative to gasoline in the United States. However, many critics argue that ethanol is not a good replacement for gasol
Both passage and lecture discuss one of alternative source of fuel, which is ethanol fuel, made from plants such as corn and sugars cane. The writer is of an opinion that ethanol is not good source for replacement with gasoline, however, the lecturer rejects this viewpoint.
Firstly, lecturer states that increase use of ethanol will not create environmental problems of global warming. Professor continues by saying that it is true that burning ethanol releases Carbon dioxide, but growing up plants such as corns, will compensate the release of Carbon dioxide that were came from burning ofethanol, because plants use and absorb Carbon dioxide from atmosphere in order to grow up. Therefore, by planting more plants such as corns, it will eliminate carbon dioxide from environment and as a result, use of ethanol will not cause global warming. On the contrary, the author believes that since use of ethanol like gasoline produce carbon dioxide, it will increase global warming.
Secondly, the professor claims that use of plants for production of ethanol will not reduce plants for animal uses, because ethanol can be produced from ceillious, which is a part and a cell of plants. It is mentioned in the lecture that these ceillious are not eatable and animals do not eat them at all. So, using plants for producing ethanol do not lower amount of food for animals that feed on plants. By contrast, the article argues that use of plant for the sake of production of ethanol, will lead on reduction of food for animals.
Finally, although the writer claims that if the government stop helping the manufacturer of ethanol by giving tax subsidies, the price of ethanol will increase, the speaker challenges this claim by stating that by increasing buyers of ethanol for using as a fuel, the production rate of ethanol will grow which in turn, will result in decreasing price of ethanol. Moreover, the professor argues that studies show that by extending production of ethanol three times, the cost of ethanol will drop down 40 percent. Therefore, if the government remove giving subsidiaries for producers of ethanol the price of ethanol would not increase.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 297, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'come'.
Suggestion: come
...the release of Carbon dioxide that were came from burning ofethanol, because plants ...
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Line 4, column 635, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he price of ethanol would not increase.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, such as, as a result, it is true, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 5.04856512141 257% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 30.3222958057 171% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 1373.03311258 131% => OK
No of words: 357.0 270.72406181 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05602240896 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.04702891845 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55559836857 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 145.348785872 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47619047619 0.540411800872 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.9 419.366225166 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 21.2450331126 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.6951218989 49.2860985944 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.846153846 110.228320801 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4615384615 21.698381199 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3846153846 7.06452816374 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.574456420666 0.272083759551 211% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.243587031968 0.0996497079465 244% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901539817303 0.0662205650399 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.357040100925 0.162205337803 220% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551264803899 0.0443174109184 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.3589403974 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.8541721854 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.0289183223 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 63.6247240618 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.498013245 122% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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