lecture and the reading Passage discussing the 70 million years old fossil of Tyrannosaurus rex. According to the article, leg bone of the T-Rex fossil materials reveal like the blood vessel, red blood cell, and Collagen b matrix. However, the lecture refutes each research presents reading Passage and he doubts about the identification of Material by a researcher.
Firstly the article emphasizes that fossil of the leg bone contains channel structure and so flexible substance represents that blood vessel of T-Rex. In contrasts, the lecture mentions that substance are not blood vessel but something else. What organism died then, bacteria formed a colony. Moist residue and soft substance are trace of bacteria colony.therefore, article claims were not true.
Secondly, the reading passage implies that either one fossil present sphere which size and red color shown that its blood vessel of T-Rex. On contrary, the lecture explains that iron like structure was also found in the Prime fossil. This look like iron but it was a reddish mineral.
Lastly, the article claimed that collagen found by testing of the leg bone.The lecturer argues to this point and state that Collagen was not found even hundred thousand years old fossil, so it is improbable idea that collagen were found in 70 million old fossils because collagen is not a long last living tissue. The Roosters might come from the human skin, the researcher who handles the fossil bone.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
the reading passage states three reasons
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 10.4613686534 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 7.30242825607 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 12.0772626932 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 0.0 22.412803532 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 30.3222958057 0% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 5.01324503311 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 35.0 1373.03311258 3% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 6.0 270.72406181 2% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.83333333333 5.08290768461 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 1.56508458007 4.04702891845 39% => The fourth root words length is low.
Word Length SD: 1.46249406457 2.5805825403 57% => Word_Length_SD is low.
Unique words: 6.0 145.348785872 4% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 1.0 0.540411800872 185% => OK
syllable_count: 9.9 419.366225166 2% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 13.0662251656 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 6.0 21.2450331126 28% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.2860985944 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 35.0 110.228320801 32% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 6.0 21.698381199 28% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06452816374 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.09492273731 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 4.33554083885 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.3589403974 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 53.8541721854 106% => OK
smog_index: 0.0 5.55761589404 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.0289183223 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.98 12.2367328918 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.83 8.42419426049 140% => OK
difficult_words: 3.0 63.6247240618 5% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 2.0 10.7273730684 19% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 4.4 10.498013245 42% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
Read sample essays from ETS:
http://www.testbig.com/users/toeflwritingmaster
Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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