The reading and lecture both discuss a fossil skeleton of a dinosaurs named sinosauropteryx. While reading claims that fossil have a pattern of line surrounding the bones and paleontologist are think that sinosauropteryx had feathers, but some critics opposed that idea and provide three reasons to support their opinion. However, the lecture say that the evidence are not convincing and refutes each of the authors reasons.
Firstly, the reading claims that fine line are not represent functional structures of living dinosaurs and it was formed after death. The reading also says that after death of animals skin were decomposed into fibers and that attached with the fossil as a line. However, the professor refutes this point by say that skin of animals was not decomposed that make any line into the fossil. Furthermore, the professor stats that other animals skeleton was not decomposed and not make such type of line.
In addition, the reading makes the argument that skeleton part that was found it was part of frills rather than feathers. The lecture refutes this claims by pointing out that chemical composition of frills was not match the skeleton rather match with feathers chemical composition.
Lastly, the reading passage argues that usually feather help animals to maintain body temperature and fly, but structure represents line was founds along the backbone and tail area. This structure are not help to fly and not effectively maintain body temperature. The lecture refutes this point by say that some animals are used feather to attract other member and this feather are used for display purpose.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 59, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a dinosaur' or simply 'dinosaurs'?
Suggestion: a dinosaur; dinosaurs
...cture both discuss a fossil skeleton of a dinosaurs named sinosauropteryx. While reading cl...
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Line 1, column 195, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'thought'.
Suggestion: thought
...unding the bones and paleontologist are think that sinosauropteryx had feathers, but ...
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Line 3, column 52, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'represented'.
Suggestion: represented
...e reading claims that fine line are not represent functional structures of living dinosau...
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Line 3, column 432, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'animals'' or 'animal's'?
Suggestion: animals'; animal's
...hermore, the professor stats that other animals skeleton was not decomposed and not mak...
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Line 7, column 206, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'helped'.
Suggestion: helped
...e and tail area. This structure are not help to fly and not effectively maintain bod...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, lastly, so, while, as for, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 22.412803532 103% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1373.03311258 100% => OK
No of words: 261.0 270.72406181 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23754789272 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62552488005 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 145.348785872 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486590038314 0.540411800872 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.0 419.366225166 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9369147896 49.2860985944 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.916666667 110.228320801 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 21.698381199 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06452816374 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.467645185159 0.272083759551 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174548213858 0.0996497079465 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814291703537 0.0662205650399 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262139266564 0.162205337803 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0890333383785 0.0443174109184 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.3589403974 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.2367328918 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 63.6247240618 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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