TPO 34

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TPO 34

The reading and listening are both about extinction of sea cow. The author of reading describes 3 heypothesis about sea cow vanishing.The lecturer casts doubt on the claims made in the article.Th professor thinks we do not know the main reason of disappearance of this enormous marine mammal.
first,Although the author of reading declares that cow sea is major source of food people who lived in siberian,as result they have over hunted sea cow in order to supply their food.The professor counters that argument by asserting that sea cow is massive creature and its weight is about 10 tones and siberian population was not larg,consequently they did not hunt lot of sea cow,Although sea cow was a good source in a harsh environment.
second,While the reading states that decreasing of kelp population changes ecosystem because kelp was the main food source of cow sea,therefore,sea cows population are influenced by diminishing of kelp population.The lecturer insists that kelps are the food source of other marine animal such walves that their population has not been decreased and this issue indicates that sea cows did not have food shortage.
third,In contrast to the reading ,which claims that European fur trader hunted large number of sea cows and this action caused sea cow s go to extinction,the lecturer states that the population of sea cows already quite decreased before the European arrived.

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Average: 7.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 135, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: The
...s 3 heypothesis about sea cow vanishing.The lecturer casts doubt on the claims made...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s 3 heypothesis about sea cow vanishing.The lecturer casts doubt on the claims made...
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...doubt on the claims made in the article.Th professor thinks we do not know the mai...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: First
...arance of this enormous marine mammal. first,Although the author of reading declares...
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Line 2, column 6, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
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...e of this enormous marine mammal. first,Although the author of reading declares that cow...
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...rce of food people who lived in siberian,as result they have over hunted sea cow in...
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...d sea cow in order to supply their food.The professor counters that argument by ass...
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...nes and siberian population was not larg,consequently they did not hunt lot of sea cow,Althou...
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...quently they did not hunt lot of sea cow,Although sea cow was a good source in a harsh en...
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... a good source in a harsh environment. second,While the reading states that decreasin...
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...d source in a harsh environment. second,While the reading states that decreasing of k...
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Line 3, column 134, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...kelp was the main food source of cow sea,therefore,sea cows population are influenced by d...
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...enced by diminishing of kelp population.The lecturer insists that kelps are the foo...
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...t sea cows did not have food shortage. third,In contrast to the reading ,which claim...
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... cows did not have food shortage. third,In contrast to the reading ,which claims t...
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...rtage. third,In contrast to the reading ,which claims that European fur trader hu...
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Suggestion: , the
...action caused sea cow s go to extinction,the lecturer states that the population of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, second, so, therefore, third, while, in contrast, in contrast to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.01324503311 219% => Less nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1182.0 1373.03311258 86% => OK
No of words: 228.0 270.72406181 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18421052632 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02353037338 2.5805825403 117% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 145.348785872 84% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535087719298 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 419.366225166 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 13.0662251656 38% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 45.0 21.2450331126 212% => Sentence length is too long
Sentence length SD: 136.175475031 49.2860985944 276% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 236.4 110.228320801 214% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.6 21.698381199 210% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.0 7.06452816374 241% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 4.19205298013 406% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.560108455328 0.272083759551 206% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.332178151625 0.0996497079465 333% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108028757789 0.0662205650399 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.368993743494 0.162205337803 227% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0804869482496 0.0443174109184 182% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.8 13.3589403974 193% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 53.8541721854 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 5.55761589404 234% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 11.0289183223 189% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.2367328918 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.42419426049 112% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 63.6247240618 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.7273730684 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.498013245 191% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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