TPO 40
The reading claims that many scientists agree that it is not possible to human presence on Mars or Moon and presents three reasons to support its approach. However, the lecturer finds all ideas which have been mentioned by the reading dubious and provides some evidences to refute them all. He believes that If the station build in 50 kilometers above surface and it is flooding in atmosphere, these problems can be solved.
First, the author argues that the atmospheric pressure at Venus' surface is greater than earth. So every spacecraft or human would be crushed when they want to landing. In contrast, the speaker brings up the idea that the pressure at 50 kilometers above the surface is equal by earth's pressure. So there is any crash at this level.
Furthermore, the reading holds the view that although there are many substances such as carbon dioxide, nitrogen and sulfuric acid on Venus' surface, there is not any reservoir of water or oxygen on it. So human cannot survived and they must import from earth in the extreme size and it is impossible solution. On the contrary, the professor underlines the fact that they can make water and oxygen out of carbon dioxide and sulfuric acid which are abundant on Venus' surface. So they can survive easily by water and oxygen which have been obtain from other substance and it is not important to import these substance from earth.
Finally, the reading passage asserts that there is a little sunlight on planets' surface, for most of sunlight have reflected by thick clouds that fill the atmosphere. So human cannot generate electricity to charge their machines and equipment. Conversely, the lecturer dismisses the issue due to the fact that these clouds are in 50 kilometers above the surface. So the station can use the sunlight which has been reflected by thick clouds. Also because of the station's elevation, they can use the direct sunlight. So human can get electricity for their apparatus from direct and reflected sunlight.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 538, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'obtained'.
Suggestion: obtained
...ily by water and oxygen which have been obtain from other substance and it is not impo...
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Line 5, column 600, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this substance' or 'these substances'?
Suggestion: this substance; these substances
...tance and it is not important to import these substance from earth. Finally, the reading pas...
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Line 7, column 442, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ich has been reflected by thick clouds. Also because of the stations elevation, they...
^^^^
Line 7, column 462, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'stations'' or 'station's'?
Suggestion: stations'; station's
...ed by thick clouds. Also because of the stations elevation, they can use the direct sunl...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, so, in contrast, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 7.30242825607 205% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 22.412803532 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 30.3222958057 125% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1373.03311258 121% => OK
No of words: 335.0 270.72406181 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95820895522 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49994608986 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 145.348785872 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507462686567 0.540411800872 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 517.5 419.366225166 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2235769426 49.2860985944 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7058823529 110.228320801 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7058823529 21.698381199 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 7.06452816374 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.442636111189 0.272083759551 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132335625173 0.0996497079465 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566683634131 0.0662205650399 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236309047044 0.162205337803 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687719518408 0.0443174109184 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.3589403974 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.2367328918 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.42419426049 95% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 63.6247240618 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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