TPO 40 integrated
In the reading, the author provides three reasons to show that presence of the human on the Venus surface is impossible. On the other hand, finding all the ideas questionable and implausible, the lecturer casts doubt on the author's reasons and asserts that if there is one station, which is floating 50 kilometers above the Venus surface, it will be possible for people to maintain on the Venus.
First, the passage of the reading posits that the atmospheric pressure on the Venus surface is 90 times more than the pressure atmospheric of the earth surface so that spacecraft and humans once reach to the Venus surface will be crushed. However, the lecturer disagrees with this reason. He declares that by floating station above the surface of the Venus the atmospheric pressure is lower than the Venus surface and it would be equal to the earth surface atmosphere. So, there is no any dangerous crush for people and spacecraft.
Furthermore, the author argues that human beings should supply oxygen and water from the earth because the Venus cannot support these two vital elements for their survival. Conversely, the lecturer posits that on the surface of Venus, there are plenty of compounds of carbon dioxide and sulfuric acid, which can be used at the station for making water and oxygen. Therefore, there is no need to transfer these two elements from the earth.
Finally, the passage reading states that solar power cells on the Venus could not achieve enough electricity power due to the presence of thick clouds which reflect a great deal of sunlight back to åspace. In the contrary, the speaker claims that at the altitude of 50 kilometers above the Venus surface that station is located, the clouds are not so thick. Thus, a considerable amount of sunlight can reach to the station directly. Therefore, the station gathers both direct sunlight from its above and reflected sunlight from its below clouds. It follows that; solar power cells will have a great amount of electricity for utilizing in the humans' machines and equipment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 483, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
... earth surface atmosphere. So, there is no any dangerous crush for people and spac...
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Discourse Markers used:
['conversely', 'finally', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.281167108753 0.261695866417 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.116710875332 0.158904122519 73% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0610079575597 0.0723426182421 84% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0450928381963 0.0435111971325 104% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0185676392573 0.0277247811725 67% => OK
Prepositions: 0.137931034483 0.128828473217 107% => OK
Participles: 0.0238726790451 0.0370669169778 64% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.48972081192 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0212201591512 0.0208969081088 102% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.140583554377 0.128158765124 110% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0238726790451 0.0158828679856 150% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0079575596817 0.0114777025283 69% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2055.0 1645.83664459 125% => OK
No of words: 343.0 271.125827815 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.99125364431 6.08160592843 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.04852973271 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.35860058309 0.374372842146 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.271137026239 0.287516216867 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.172011661808 0.187439937562 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0787172011662 0.113142543107 70% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48972081192 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 145.348785872 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475218658892 0.539623497131 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 48.6669787568 53.8517498576 90% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0529801325 107% => OK
Sentence length: 24.5 21.7502111507 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.0881060033 49.3711431718 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.785714286 132.220823453 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 21.7502111507 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.714285714286 0.878197800319 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.39072847682 29% => OK
Readability: 51.6137026239 50.5018328374 102% => OK
Elegance: 2.45588235294 1.90840788429 129% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.740688448736 0.549887131256 135% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.134891537858 0.142949733639 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.104771666873 0.0787303798458 133% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.624407444026 0.631733273073 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.216820581424 0.139662658121 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.360105665399 0.266732575781 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.170878390985 0.103435571967 165% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.547681885119 0.414875509568 132% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0934771995281 0.0530846634433 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.588510890572 0.40443939384 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359467194128 0.0528353158467 68% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.26048565121 94% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.49668874172 29% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.62251655629 138% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.1766004415 94% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.2958057395 87% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.