The article states that condition on Venous are so extreme and inhospitals that maintain humans presence would be impossible and provides three reasons of support. However, the professor states that there is a soulution to maintain human life on Venous by establishing a station that float on the planet surafce about 60 km and not standing on it. And he refutes each of the author’s reasons.
First, the reading claims that atmospheric pressure on Venous’ surface is 90 times greater than on the Earth, so any thing, including spacecraft, would land on it would be crashed. The professor opposes this point by explaining this pressure is lowered above Venous surface. If we build a spacecraft above 50 km above the surface, there is no danager of being destrooyed by the planet’s Atmospheric pressure.
Second, the article avers that since there are no reservoirs of water, no oxygen, and the planet’s atmoshphere made up mostly of carbon dioxide, nitrogen, and sulpheric acid, establishing a permanent station on venous would be impractical. The professor, on the other hand, refutes this point by stating even though no water, or oxgyen on Venous, undergoing chemical processes can produce them. He explains that by using the elements that made up of Venous atmoshpere, we could produce oxygen, and water easily. Therefore, there is no necessary to supply all necessary elements from the Earth.
Third, the reading posits that a very little sunlight reaches the planet’s surface, because, it reflected by thick clouds, made from carbon dioxide, that fill the atmoshpere. The professor agrees that the thick clouds is truly reflect 60 percent of the sunlight. However, above the planet’s surface the clouds become less thick, so sunlight could reach the floating station on constant level. Meantime, the professor, emphaisez the benefits of using the reflected sunlight as extra source to use. And thus, he concludes both the sunlight that comes from above, and below the surface could be collected.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 349, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...fce about 60 km and not standing on it. And he refutes each of the author's...
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Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'anything'?
Suggestion: anything
... 90 times greater than on the Earth, so any thing, including spacecraft, would land on it...
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Line 5, column 386, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...enous, undergoing chemical processes can produce them. He explains that by using ...
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Line 7, column 233, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'reflected'.
Suggestion: reflected
...r agrees that the thick clouds is truly reflect 60 percent of the sunlight. However, ab...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, therefore, third, thus, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 30.3222958057 135% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1373.03311258 125% => OK
No of words: 324.0 270.72406181 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29938271605 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.824441722 2.5805825403 109% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 145.348785872 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527777777778 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 419.366225166 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.51434878587 462% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3108056673 49.2860985944 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.466666667 110.228320801 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 21.698381199 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 7.06452816374 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344045844175 0.272083759551 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11259073417 0.0996497079465 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633313903199 0.0662205650399 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200253051564 0.162205337803 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260116418397 0.0443174109184 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.3589403974 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.2367328918 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.42419426049 108% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 63.6247240618 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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