TPO-42 - Integrated Writing Task Glass is a favored building material for modern architecture, yet it is also very dangerous for wild birds. Because they often cannot distinguish between glass and open air, millions of birds are harmed every year when the
The article states that glass which is used in construction for windows or cosmetic purposes in dangerous for wild birds because they can't discriminate between glass and open air so they fly through the windows and it will injure them. The article offers three preventive procedures but the lecturer refutes each of them and claims that they are not helpful.
first, the article claims that one-way glass is an instrumental way because birds think that it is a solid barrier but the professor rejects this method by saying that one-way glasses are reflective and they are similar to mirror so bird could see the reflection of the sky or a tree and the flew through the glass will occur.
Second, the passage explains that colorful lines on the glasses will be helpful for birds to distinguish the window but the lecturer avers that birds perceive that the space between thsese stripes are holes and they will attack through them. this solution will be useful if the lines become have been drawn near to each other but on the other hand this close lines will make inside the building dark.
Third, utilizing magnetic field equipments will help the birds to locate the building and it will prevent their collision. The professor challenges this solution by saying that birds harness their sense for electromagnetic signals in remote movements. As a result for short distances they use their sight sense and brightness of light.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 135, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...n dangerous for wild birds because they cant discriminate between glass and open air...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: First
...nd claims that they are not helpful. first, the article claims that one-way glass ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 293, Rule ID: THE_FLEW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'flu' (flew is past tense of fly, flu is a viral disease)?
Suggestion: flu
...reflection of the sky or a tree and the flew through the glass will occur. Second...
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Line 5, column 243, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...oles and they will attack through them. this solution will be useful if the lines be...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, third, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 7.30242825607 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 30.3222958057 66% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 1373.03311258 87% => OK
No of words: 241.0 270.72406181 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95435684647 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39363348107 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 145.348785872 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547717842324 0.540411800872 101% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 419.366225166 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 21.2450331126 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.8999959363 49.2860985944 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.25 110.228320801 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.125 21.698381199 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 7.06452816374 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.464880551695 0.272083759551 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188859726077 0.0996497079465 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116055267068 0.0662205650399 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276656149254 0.162205337803 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500593799574 0.0443174109184 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.3589403974 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 53.8541721854 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.0289183223 114% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.2367328918 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 63.6247240618 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.7273730684 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.498013245 133% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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