Tpo 45

Essay topics:

Tpo 45

In this set of material both of the reading and lecture discuss about old fossil structures related with Dib bees which lived as early as 200 million years ago. These structures are similar to modern nest. The reading provides three reasons that these nests were not created by bees; however the lecture finds all reasons dubious. The information the professor professes contradicts the fact outlined in the text.

First, the author of reading claims that there was not any bee in 200 million years ago and the earliest fossil bees are related with 100 million years ago; however the lecture expresses that there is a spatial kind of resin which is produced by tree and can save the fossil of bees. It is plausible that this kind of resin had not evolved in 200 million years ago, as a result the fossils of bees have not reminded. Just because of we could not find more fossils linked with 200 million years ago, it is not a logical reason that there was any bee in that time.

Second, the article declares that since the bees and flowers have a close relationship with each other and in there was not any flowering plant in 200 million years ago; consequently this date for these fossils are not connected with bees; however the professor refutes it. He believes that when the flowering plants did not existed on the earth, the bees had adapted to non-flowering plants and this close relationship has been stable forever.

Moreover, the reading passage contends that the modern nests are not similar to the found structures; however the lecture professes that chemical evidence which has discovered in these old structures support this similarity. There is a kind of waterproof substance that old bees used in their nest and fortunately the modern bees use it in their nests.

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Average: 0.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 423, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_I[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'because we' instead.
Suggestion: because we
...fossils of bees have not reminded. Just because of we could not find more fossils linked with...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 326, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'exist'
Suggestion: exist
... that when the flowering plants did not existed on the earth, the bees had adapted to n...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, moreover, second, so, kind of, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1373.03311258 108% => OK
No of words: 307.0 270.72406181 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8338762215 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38915700053 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 145.348785872 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469055374593 0.540411800872 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 447.3 419.366225166 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 21.2450331126 127% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.7277401247 49.2860985944 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.909090909 110.228320801 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9090909091 21.698381199 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 7.06452816374 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0682780097994 0.272083759551 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0307397654604 0.0996497079465 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.023968423128 0.0662205650399 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0458469822174 0.162205337803 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283598758981 0.0443174109184 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.3589403974 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 53.8541721854 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.0289183223 114% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.2367328918 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 63.6247240618 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.498013245 122% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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