tpo29
In the reading, the author claims that theoretically dinosaurs survived along the winters by pointing out 3 reasons of supporting through migrating from unpleasant weather conditions like Alaska’s North Slope to warm places. One of most common dinosaurs that lives in this region is edmontosaur. However, finding all the ideas questionable and implausible, the lecturer totally repudiates the claim and presents some evidence to the contrary.
1. At first, the author argues that owing to the fact that edmontosaurs fed on plants to a great extant and Alaska’s North Slope plants do not grow in winters, they are have to migrate to a place to find food. Conversely, the lecturer brings up the idea that this region’s summer in a hundred million years ago was wormer than today. Thereby, the warmth and extensive day light led to produce a plethora of plants and it was a perfect resource for winters and as a result they were not force to migrate for food.
2. In addition, the reading passage holds the view that edmontosaurs lived in herds so it is easy for them to migrate. On the contrary, the lecturer disputes this point by clarifying the fact that there are other reasons for living in herd like preventing from predators. Also, Resovel Alk that lives in in herd in the United States and is large plant eater but does not migrate.
3. Finally, the author asserts these animals had been able to migrate long distances for a long time. As the last point for supporting migration of edmontosaurs. The lecturer, though, dismisses it by pointing out that even though they were vigorous, they could not left the juvenile behind. Because young animals both were not physically capable of migrating for a long distance and living with their own, adult edmontosaurs did not migrate.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 174, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...plants do not grow in winters, they are have to migrate to a place to find food. Con...
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Line 2, column 496, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'forced'.
Suggestion: forced
...r winters and as a result they were not force to migrate for food. 2. In addition, ...
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Line 2, column 502, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'migrating'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'force' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: migrating
...ers and as a result they were not force to migrate for food. 2. In addition, the reading...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 302, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: in
...predators. Also, Resovel Alk that lives in in herd in the United States and is large ...
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Line 4, column 265, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'leave'
Suggestion: leave
...ough they were vigorous, they could not left the juvenile behind. Because young anim...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, finally, first, however, if, so, in addition, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 30.3222958057 142% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1373.03311258 110% => OK
No of words: 302.0 270.72406181 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99337748344 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72455393746 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 145.348785872 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579470198675 0.540411800872 107% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 419.366225166 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8204234549 49.2860985944 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 110.228320801 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 21.698381199 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06452816374 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358606600483 0.272083759551 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123651324604 0.0996497079465 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701635025893 0.0662205650399 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201744638685 0.162205337803 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425794293142 0.0443174109184 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.3589403974 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.8541721854 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.2367328918 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 63.6247240618 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.7273730684 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.