Tpo45
Both the reading and lecture are about the old fossil structures which have been discovered inside an old fossil tree- its date returns 200 million years ago. The reading provides three reasons that these structures do not belong to dib bees and then supports them. The lecturer casts doubt on the claims made in the article and finds all of arguments dubious.
First of all, the author of reading declares that researchers could not find any bee fossil related to 200 million years ago- the oldest fossil is associated with 100 million years ago. This point is challenged by the lecturer. She points out that there is a convincing possible for lack of fossil bees in 200 million years ago. The professor elaborates on this by mentioning that in the mentioned time, there were a few trees which could produce resin. One should notice that this substance is responsible for maintaining fossil bees and since the trees had not evolved for producing resin; hence, any fossil could not remain.
Secondly, the article contends that there were not flowering plants in aforementioned time; subsequently, the bees could not have feed on flowers- it should mention that the first flowering plant was appeared in 125 million years ago; in the contrast, the professor claims that bees could feed on nonflowering plants like fern and pine tree and then after evolving flowering plants, they adapted to new condition and change their diet.
Finally, the reading passage states that the discovered structures are not similar to modern nests and they have some differences in details. For instance old structures do not include any caps in chambers and the structures may have created by other insects instead of bees. This argument is rebutted by the lecturer and she expresses that now there is decisive chemical evidence which supports the role of bees in these structures. When researchers analyzed the old structures and they could find a similar chemical watertight substance which is used by modern bees.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 30.3222958057 115% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1373.03311258 122% => OK
No of words: 331.0 270.72406181 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0664652568 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51629531942 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 145.348785872 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507552870091 0.540411800872 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.0 419.366225166 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.116997792494 855% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.3450859236 49.2860985944 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 110.228320801 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4615384615 21.698381199 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06452816374 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100915121824 0.272083759551 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042924439731 0.0996497079465 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0247182834788 0.0662205650399 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0597354021059 0.162205337803 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297717390201 0.0443174109184 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.3589403974 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 63.6247240618 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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