You have spent the weekend staying with some English friend Write a card to them In your card you should Thank your friend for the weekend Say what you enjoyed most about the weekend Invite them to stay with you Write 35 45 words on your answer sheet

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You have spent the weekend staying with some English friend
Write a card to them, In your card, you should:
- Thank your friend for the weekend
- Say what you enjoyed most about the weekend
- Invite them to stay with you
Write 35-45 words on your answer sheet

Hi, Tom!
Thank you so much for invited me to stay with you for the weekend. I'm very happy and really missed this time. It's so exciting when we were going camping outside together, had some biscuits and played volleyball. I hope that you can come and visit me at Tet holiday. I'll cook for you some special tradition food as sticky rice, spring roll,...
Love,
Jan

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Average: 8.1 (34 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 68, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ed me to stay with you for the weekend. Im very happy and really missed this time....
^^
Line 2, column 267, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...u can come and visit me at Tet holiday. Ill cook for you some special tradition foo...
^^^
Line 2, column 339, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...adition food as sticky rice, spring roll,... Love, Jan
^^
Line 2, column 343, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion food as sticky rice, spring roll,... Love, Jan
^^^
Line 3, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... as sticky rice, spring roll,... Love, Jan
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
really, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 41.998997996 12% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 301.0 1615.20841683 19% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 67.0 315.596192385 21% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49253731343 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.86100555258 4.20363070211 68% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09519493976 2.80592935109 75% => OK
Unique words: 57.0 176.041082164 32% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.850746268657 0.561755894193 151% => OK
syllable_count: 89.1 506.74238477 18% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8675134595 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.2 106.682146367 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.4 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230641425956 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908204087607 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125478663032 0.0667982634062 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237940584323 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 13.0946893788 49% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 50.2224549098 167% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 11.3001002004 42% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.17 12.4159519038 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.64 8.58950901804 77% => OK
difficult_words: 10.0 78.4519038076 13% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.33 Out of 6
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