Age discrimination occurs when a decision is made on the basis of a person's age. In the workplace, these are most often decisions about being employed in the first place, winning promotions or being unfairly dismissed. Should discrimination against older workers be made illegal?
Age has been a great factor in considering one's ability to make decisions. The occurrence of discrimination are experienced by people due to their age especially in the workplace when it comes to hiring, promotions or retirement. In my point of view, employees who are unfairly treated must be protected by the government by passing out a law.
To begin with, senior workers has an equal right to be treated properly with the other employees. Age does not matter if they are able to do the job. More so, the management need to consider their reasons why they are still working even at their senior years. In the first place, a particular company would need their service and vice-versa. The relationship between the management and its workers is mutual as it would lead them to better understanding of what is the most important in terms of their job functions regardless of age.
Apart from this, the fact that old employees does not need the cost for further training because they are already knowledgeable enough about the business. They can work productively without any supervision and guidance anymore. Other self-enhancements could be invested on new hires and inexperienced employees, instead. For example, the manager is suddenly asking to accomplish the report on annual product quality index, they can immediately pinpoint the senior workers to finish the job for the reason that they already know what to do and how to do it.
Overall, there should be a law to make regarding the discrimination against old people in the workplace so that they could be protected to their rights and be treated fairly against abusive management. After all, they are still individuals like any other else who only wanted to earn a living.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, regarding, so, still, after all, apart from, for example, to begin with, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 31.9359605911 141% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 291.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98625429553 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8796717757 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 139.433497537 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594501718213 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5959943675 50.4703680194 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.642857143 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.25397266985 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164436761361 0.242375264174 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559305652736 0.0925447433944 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563081102302 0.071462118173 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109952987757 0.151781067708 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584225208437 0.0609392437508 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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