These days, the societies are witnessing a tremendous change as the result of invention of computers. This phenomenon has changed the lifestyle of human beings in many aspects, and in my opinion these changes are positive and beneficial.
To begin with, computers have provided us a new communication platform which has diversified our lives. People can be in touch with each other in any time with a single click and the news can spread along the world in less than a second, so all individuals from different nationalities could be aware of their neighbor’s problems and help them to take care of the problems as soon as possible. For example the people from more affluent nations can get a hand to those who are living in poverty and struggling with crutial predicaments in their life.
In addition, computer devices have simplified the jobs for the human kind, as a great deal of manual tasks which was done by hand in the past, have been put into the hand of computer aided devices such as robots or automatic machines. Such practices have enhanced the conviniance of work places for our kind.
To recapitulate, this is an indispensable fact that computers have had an important role in improving the quality of our lives and benefiting the members of society.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, for example, in addition, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1065.0 1207.87684729 88% => OK
No of words: 217.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90783410138 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83060366382 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635944700461 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 379.143842365 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.2423280949 50.4703680194 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.125 104.977214359 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.125 20.9669160288 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.875 7.25397266985 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0343154217073 0.242375264174 14% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0189434014096 0.0925447433944 20% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414294313997 0.071462118173 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0206088551436 0.151781067708 14% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267300061036 0.0609392437508 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 12.6369458128 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 53.1260098522 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.9458128079 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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