in a cashless society, people use more credit cards. what are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon.

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in a cashless society, people use more credit cards. what are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon.

The role of credit cards for the daily expenses is widely debated, with many people claiming that the benefits it offers are no match for its drawbacks. However, I do not accept this and I will explain why in this essay.

One of the most conspicuous aspects in the burgeoning uses of credit cards is that it makes life easier as people do not have to worry about carrying cash for their day-to-day expenses. Not only does it protect money from being stolen by blocking their card instantly, but it also saves lots of time as one does not have to stand in a queue and can shop conveniently. Needless to say, all these benefits stand people in good stead, when it comes to indulging in online shopping and avoiding rambling around the malls.

There are, however, some pitfalls that can easily overwhelm the potential benefits of a cashless society. For instance, people using these services have to pay extra charges to the service providers. Besides, hackers can also make unwanted transactions and jeopardise personal as well as financial information. Hence, it is apparent why many are against the soaring trends of a cashless society.

In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that only when convergent efforts from all sectors are ensured can we expect to see considerable progress in benefitting the cashless society.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so, well, for instance, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1121.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 227.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93832599119 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59703492945 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612334801762 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4774099965 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.1 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.25397266985 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166051066201 0.242375264174 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649581267685 0.0925447433944 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383591501491 0.071462118173 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0967355763163 0.151781067708 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324160885802 0.0609392437508 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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