In a cashless society, people use more credit cards. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon.
Recently, the phenomenon of utilizing the credit cards and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although this issue is highly beneficial as it regarded by a substantial number of individuals both constructive and positive, others hold opponents views. I am inclined to believe that diminishing using money in businesses can be a plus as it could develop some brilliant aspects for its adherents.
From a social standpoint, credit cards can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact of economic issues. Not only does every purchase with ease, but also it aviodes wasting a great deal amount of capital. According to my own research, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discover the amount of time and money which is spent annually for producing money. Another crucial benefit is this method of purchasing by cards is quite environmentally-friendly. Certainly, a number of trees should cut down in order to create the paper which are used to manufacture money.
On the one hand, there is no doubt the continuosly use of credit cards instead of cash has some demerits as well. First and foremost, it has some restriction occasionally. For instance, the accebility of using them much depends on some fundamental subjects including the Internet and network connections or the intact features which are used for this purpose. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious world-renowned university fas asserted that the network dysfunction in the previous year led to unsatisfactory feeling among customers. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of using cash.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the advantages of buying by cards far outweigh its drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, well, while, for instance, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1207.87684729 130% => OK
No of words: 295.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32203389831 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20150783206 2.71678728327 118% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 139.433497537 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630508474576 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 379.143842365 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8205990142 50.4703680194 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.142857143 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 7.25397266985 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124437418619 0.242375264174 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412990802132 0.0925447433944 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332798959366 0.071462118173 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0699229403941 0.151781067708 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278393616905 0.0609392437508 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.32886699507 120% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 55.0591133005 180% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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