Expansion of cities is inevitable, due to rising population and migration of people to major cities. There is an ongoing debate whether governments should improve public transport network or construct better road infrastructure to facilitate car ownership. This essay will discuss why governments should focus on the public transport, as well as roads to cater the needs of expanding cities.
Governments should introduce various means of transportation for people residing in outer-suburbs of cities. Public should be able to choose from buses or trains, whatever is more convenient to them. For instance, a person may choose bus over train, if bus is more closer to his house. A survey conducted by an university showed that 80% people will opt for public transport if network is efficient. Therefore, governments should put focus on building better public transport network.
Building better road infrastructure can save time for people, who do not have access to public transportation. For some people driving their own car is much more convenient. For example, I prefer to use my own to go-to office because I do not have any access to public transport. Hence, governments should keep in mind those people who need roads for commute.
In conclusion, governments should tackle the issue of expansion of cities by constructing better roads and efficient public transport network. In my opinion, governments should spend equal amount on both public transport and roads.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 235, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to bus'
Suggestion: to bus
...them. For instance, a person may choose bus over train, if bus is more closer to hi...
Line 3, column 261, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE
Message: Use only 'closer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
...on may choose bus over train, if bus is more closer to his house. A survey conducted by an ...
Line 3, column 309, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
...ser to his house. A survey conducted by an university showed that 80% people will ...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1248.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 233.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35622317597 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97295737708 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570815450644 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.9240683612 50.4703680194 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.1428571429 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6428571429 20.9669160288 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.25397266985 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 2.91625615764 274% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.506639238483 0.242375264174 209% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188552696166 0.0925447433944 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111405468671 0.071462118173 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.330002779567 0.151781067708 217% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044010408434 0.0609392437508 72% => OK
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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