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Company Top level Authorities should or should not take employees suggestions or ideas to make any decisions. Discuss

Essay topics: Company Top level Authorities should or should not take employees suggestions or ideas to make any decisions. Discuss

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It is argued that a board of directors of companies should take ideas from employees into account when making decisions. I am partially agree with this idea as it depends on what type of suggestions to be taken or not.

On the one hand, I believe that in many certain circumstances like decisions on business or financial matters must be made based on knowledge and experience of senior managers. Reasons for this state is because these people understand current situations of companies and markets so that they can do what benefits company mostly. For example, a company want to extend to Japanese market is not the case which is suitable to ask for staff opinions as workers know nothing about a particular market. The workers, in this case, are good as their major only. Such decision making may lead to the outcome that destroy a company.

On the other hand, these leaders should convey their employees’ ideas if they make decision about company pension programs or working conditions improvements as this kind of decision affect workers directly. For instance, to design annual trip for company, manager of personnel department should conduct a survey on where people desire to visit, what kind of services or activities that they anticipate. By collecting all ideas from employees, satisfaction level about the trip could be increased and play an important role in improving people loyalty.

In conclusion, it is not absolutely correct to make decisions based on company members’ ideas. However, it is worth to do so for decisions which have direct relations to these people.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 262.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11832061069 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78894830007 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618320610687 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.325123152709 308% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6560347976 50.4703680194 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.75 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220701855038 0.242375264174 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798078533734 0.0925447433944 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100175560174 0.071462118173 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148447357964 0.151781067708 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109160593278 0.0609392437508 179% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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