With the development of technology children are now living in a world that is completely different to what it was 50 years ago What problems does this cause for society and the family

Essay topics:

With the development of technology children are now living in a world that is completely different to what it was 50 years ago.

What problems does this cause for society and the family?

Since the mid of the 20th century, technology has been developed significantly, this development affect a lot of humans lives, especially on children. Some people believe that this development of technology has many advantages, while others argue that this development has a negative impact on people lives. This essay will discuss the negative impact of the technology on the society and on the family.

Firstly, the development of technology affect badly the family members relationships. These days, family members are spending less hours together than they were in the past. Recent research, which was conducted in the Washington University, has shown that the American families are spending lesser time together, they only spend 5 hours weekly, while in the past they were meeting for more than 20 hours per a week. Therefore, it seems clear that the development of technology affects negatively the family relationships.

Secondly, the development of technology has led to spread many diseases. These days, people suffer from many diseases due to watching TV and computer for longer hour. For example, according to the recent study which was conducted in Jordan University of Science and Technology, 70% of Jordanian people suffer from diseases due to sitting for longer hours working on their computers. Thus, the development of technology has contributed to spread of diseases.

In conclusion, this essay discussed the problems which are developed due to technology development. In my opinion, I believe that these technologies affect on people lives badly.

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Average: 6.6 (6 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: LESS_DOLLARSMINUTESHOURS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer hours'?
Suggestion: fewer hours
...These days, family members are spending less hours together than they were in the past. Re...
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Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun hours is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...These days, family members are spending less hours together than they were in the pa...
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Line 7, column 150, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...nion, I believe that these technologies affect on people lives badly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 244.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45491803279 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93287748763 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512295081967 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 413.1 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.894894106 50.4703680194 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.384615385 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7692307692 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.25397266985 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218386192418 0.242375264174 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928320440688 0.0925447433944 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391076210109 0.071462118173 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139204077229 0.151781067708 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03418626975 0.0609392437508 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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