Do you think consumer should avoid over packed products or it is responsibility of producer to avoid extra packing of products? Give your own views or any relevant example with your own experience

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Do you think consumer should avoid over packed products or it is responsibility of producer to avoid extra packing of products? Give your own views or any relevant example with your own experience

Some people believe shopper should not purchase extra packed products. Other argued that manufacturer should be responsible for avoiding over packing of goods in order to limit the amount of debris thrown into the environment. In my opinion, I agree that it is producer’s decision to determine how much wrapping is enough for their products.

First, products maker is the one who understand their products the most. They know each and every details in their product, as well as ingredients to form it. Therefore, they can decide how to store their products in the best condition to sell to customers. Decision on how much it should be wrapped is also a part of the specification. For example, I bought a pack of dried fruit a month ago. When the shipper delivered it to me, it was a surprise to me because it was packed carefully in 3 plastic bags so that the fruit is crispy for a long time and not broken. Such good care increases customer loyalty to the company, therefore, maintain the number of consumer.

Second, producer’s desire is to sell their best products to consumers. Experience from consumers on the quality of the product is an award to them and is helpful to promote the product. In addition, producer not only serves customer within a town, but also distributes nationwide and in some cases, worldwide. For such far distance supply, it is important to pack the goods carefully so that customer receive it as is. For instance, I ordered a bottle of glass cleaner from Hanoi City to Ho Chi Minh City. I was happy to receive the package because it was not broken and was wrapped with proper material, as well as resort for protection. Increasing customer’s satisfaction is a major factor in business.

In conclusion, for the reasons mentioned above, I support the idea that it is producer’s obligation to get out of excessive packed products as it is helpful to develop their sustainable business.

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Average: 7.7 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, in some cases

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.5418719212 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 20.9802955665 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1207.87684729 134% => OK
No of words: 330.0 242.827586207 136% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89090909091 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 3.92707691288 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93589294786 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 139.433497537 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548484848485 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.9 379.143842365 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.325123152709 308% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.606966783 50.4703680194 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6666666667 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11111111111 7.25397266985 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198181370108 0.242375264174 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621329021726 0.0925447433944 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525360064193 0.071462118173 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126660890184 0.151781067708 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260821882355 0.0609392437508 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 55.0591133005 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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