Education is important as it teach ethics and life value as it teaches us practical things for future employment. What is your opinion?

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Education is important as it teach ethics and life value as it teaches us practical things for future employment. What is your opinion?

These days it's very important for everyone to understand the importance of education since it helps to teach life values and prepare us for future employment. In this essay, I shall be providing my viewpoint about the importance of education.

Firstly, education plays an important role in one's life to achieve goal. In addition to this, it also teaches moral values of life. So, it is very important to understand the value of education in one's life as it helps to build self confidence and discipline. For instance, there are companies who prefer students with good education background as compared to no education.
Secondly, it also teaches student to choose career by empowering mind with good thoughts. Moreover, the students who have not completed their studies up-to the mark might suffer difficulty in finding job.

Life gives you challenge on daily basis but education guide you with human values to fight with these challenges. I personally believe that education should be made compulsory for everyone before starting the job as it teaches you in most of the aspect used in daily life.

In conclusion, government should take required steps to educate people so that they can understand the value of education.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 5.75862068966 278% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1033.0 1207.87684729 86% => OK
No of words: 201.0 242.827586207 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13930348259 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72749368495 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606965174129 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 379.143842365 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.736684949 50.4703680194 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9090909091 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.36363636364 7.25397266985 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341328510928 0.242375264174 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130515640799 0.0925447433944 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111400870741 0.071462118173 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179646330217 0.151781067708 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1163932416 0.0609392437508 191% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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