Give an example of an accomplished person whose success didn’t have any effect of his bad neighbourhood
Many people are of opinion that region plays a prime factor in a person’s success. In my opinion success not only depends on the environment or the native place to which the person belongs but it is also dependent upon the effort one puts in to achieve the success. In this article, I will further explain my view with valid examples.
Often one’s native place lacks basic facilities but a person acquires leadership qualities and determination to become a successful person in one’s life from his native place only. The behavior of family members, neighbors, friends, classmates, roommates or teachers defines the overall personality and trait of a person. The people with which you spend your entire childhood plays an important role in achieving your dreams but to learn new things and acquire essential skills that are required to bag good opportunities one needs to move out his native place.
However, it is not only native environment that plays the important role in individual success. After an individual move out from his native place, he learns new things & meets new people. Meeting new people expand one’s horizon and perspective that helps the person to think beyond one’s abilities and work towards their dreams. For example – Barack Obama, 44th President of the United States achieved all his success after leaving his native place. New places helped him learn new skills and opened “an ocean of opportunities”.
To conclude, the only native environment may not be behind an individual’s success. There are a lot of other factors that take an individual towards success.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, for example, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 262.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25190839695 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87897235734 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580152671756 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.720722747 50.4703680194 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.846153846 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233272982417 0.242375264174 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09802531827 0.0925447433944 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459180726584 0.071462118173 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162730356789 0.151781067708 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350767035639 0.0609392437508 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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