Over the past years, whether a country’s success should be measured based on its economic growth or national happiness index has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that national happiness index can measure a nation’s success, such issue is regarded thoroughly as both positive and constructive by a substantial number of individuals. In my opinion, I am inclined to believe that the measurement of economic growth can be a plus, and I will discuss the controversial aspects of that throughout this essay.
To begin with, a small nation, Bhutan, has proved success in using National Happiness Index as the primary way to measure its progress. It measures prosperity through the spiritual, physical, social and environmental health of its citizens and nature environment. According to one of the studies conducted by University of New South Wales, 87% of Australians support the notion that happiness is the most important thing a country should focus on as majority of people believe that it helps creating a harmony society. Therefore, National Happiness Index measures citizen’s satisfaction which ultimately benefits a society.
On the other hand, it is impossible to deny the importance of economic growth for a country that provides better infrastructures, education, transport and services to its citizens. For instance, a research conducted by Ministry of Economic Affairs showed that countries with higher economic growth has higher corresponding National Happiness Index. Hence, National Happiness Index is heavily relied on a country’s economic development.
In conclusion, I profoundly believe that the wealth of a country shall be determined based on both National Happiness Index and its economic growth. Governments of the developing countries shall create policies related to environmental conservation and sustainability to ensure well-being of their citizens and increase their happiness index.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to create' or 'create'.
Suggestion: to create; create
...ajority of people believe that it helps creating a harmony society. Therefore, National ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1207.87684729 138% => OK
No of words: 291.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72508591065 5.00649968141 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26646718446 2.71678728327 120% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546391752577 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 519.3 379.143842365 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1949016141 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.833333333 104.977214359 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.25397266985 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369941682402 0.242375264174 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159446581619 0.0925447433944 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776022636052 0.071462118173 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241883858215 0.151781067708 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509421215748 0.0609392437508 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 12.6369458128 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 53.1260098522 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.25 11.5310837438 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.25 8.32886699507 123% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 55.0591133005 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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