The importance of cars and airplane in modern life. Give example.

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The importance of cars and airplane in modern life. Give example.

The importance of cars and airplane in modern life has always been a debatable topic. Many people believe that modern ways of transport system saves time and provide enough space for us. In my opinion, it is completely agreed that the effective way of modern transportation makes human life much easier. This essay would further elaborate the reasons why cars and airplanes became so popular and considered as the best means of transportation in present world with clear examples.

To commence with, the most important benefits of cars are it will provide us privacy and the majority of the population around the globe consider the car as the best way to reach the destination. With the rapid increase in the development and technology advancement, many features are added that makes our commute very easy and comfortable. Moreover, if a person owns a car, he or she can travel to any place without planning and no need to wait for public and private services such as bus, train, and other vehicles. For example, people living in cities can travel to work easily and can reach on time, for cities where the temperatures are extremely cold or hot, cars are the best mode of travel. This example clearly exemplifies us that cars provide us individual privacy and space.

Secondly, helicopters have opted as other best method of traveling to longer distance. Traveling in airplanes has numerous benefits. It helps us to reach our destination within the short period of time compared to other transportation ways, saves time and importantly for any emergency issued aero planes are the best-suited mode of travel. For example, employees working in corporate offices can travel to other branches within the short period of notice to attend Business meetings.

According to the arguments aforementioned, one can reach out to the conclusion that cars and airplanes are the great innovations in the modern world to make people travel a longer distance within less effort and providing individual space to them.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... reach our destination within the short period of time compared to other transportation ways, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, such as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 8.36945812808 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 1207.87684729 139% => OK
No of words: 331.0 242.827586207 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08459214502 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 3.92707691288 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75231726318 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 139.433497537 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549848942598 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.0 379.143842365 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.542592592 50.4703680194 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.214285714 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6428571429 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.25397266985 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249087680917 0.242375264174 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0976113850291 0.0925447433944 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110512160893 0.071462118173 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155603148904 0.151781067708 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827261466449 0.0609392437508 136% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 55.0591133005 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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