It is argued that getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The effect of getting married at younger ages which was debatable has now become more controversial.The substantial influence of marrying before finishing school or getting a job has sparked the controversy on teenagers in recent year.It can be agreed getting married with someone in young age can lead to many problems.The essay will ellaborate cons of getting married and will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset there are numerous reasons how marrying someone in early age can be problemetic the most conspicious one stem from the fact that, marriage needs long term commitment, marrying before finishing school can affect both lives and their future.Both husband and wife couldnot concentrate on their studies as they are going through lots of emotions for instance; teenager are not mature to understand the commitment, everything get changed after married which lead mental tension and affect their studies.
Nevertheless, early marriage is practice in some developing country where girls are forced to get married, marrying at an early age without any job will hamper their life for instance; couples will be facing financial difficulties, they should be dependent on their parents for all the basic needs.Moreover, they will suffer from health problem and other depression.
In nutshell, early marriage should be banned on all the countries and government should educate and aware people about the effect of early marriage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, nevertheless, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1222.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 226.0 242.827586207 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40707964602 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84422080377 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610619469027 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6551724138 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 56.0 20.5024630542 273% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 132.645203456 50.4703680194 263% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 305.5 104.977214359 291% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.5 20.9669160288 269% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.25397266985 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207228636161 0.242375264174 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119129611622 0.0925447433944 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107421614373 0.071462118173 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119129611622 0.151781067708 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107421614373 0.0609392437508 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.3 12.6369458128 256% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 14.64 53.1260098522 28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 10.9458128079 229% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.99 11.5310837438 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.61 8.32886699507 127% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.94827586207 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.4 10.3980295567 235% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.0898876404 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 69.5 Out of 90
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