It is argued that getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Today, early age girl marriage is a root problem of the society. As per my opinion, we should restrict such marriages and have to spread awareness of outcomes of such step. This essay will discuss about possible results of such marriage.
Firstly, child marriage is the critical problem for developing countries where many girls are illiterate and poor. Their family do not know about outcomes of early marriage and as per their culture traditions they blindly follow this path. For instance, in India many states have more than 25% of child marriage rate which shows how bad environment is there for women. Hence, government should implement strict regulation and have to implement effective campaigns to protect rights of a girl.
Secondly, girl's body is not ready for the marriage. The burden to fulfill family responsibilities is really hard for them. Therefore, in many cases, girls attempt suicide or follow wrong path. They are not capable to handle pressure at such a early age. For example, in case of minor marriages, ratio of divorce rate is almost 25% in India. Thus, it would be better to spread awareness through child education program and protect minor girls from such traditions.
In conclusion, minor girls are not physically and mentally capable to hold responsibilities of family. So, we should protect their marriage rights and have to create positive environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1169.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 226.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17256637168 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6688752862 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579646017699 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.220772088 50.4703680194 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.9333333333 104.977214359 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0666666667 20.9669160288 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.25397266985 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00613852987067 0.242375264174 3% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00187505052357 0.0925447433944 2% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00701579664209 0.071462118173 10% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00327118020051 0.151781067708 2% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00566585030799 0.0609392437508 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 12.6369458128 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.11 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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