The mass media including TV, radio and newspaper influence our society and shape our opinions and characters. What is your opinion?
Undoubtedly, the mass media including televisions, radios, online blogs, and newspapers influence people's opinion lavishly. These mass media have an extravagant power to convince on the matter which they wanted to. In this essay, I shall discuss effects of the mass media in people's decision-making behavior and state my own opinion.
People are easily persuaded by mass media as they trust them most and they even don't have much time to validate the news sources. If the public media criticize a celebrity for some reasons, it also impels to change our opinion about them. There are many cases where we have seen some TV or movie stars who get huge supporters or fans while other lose fame and popularity because of the power of the communication media. Also, these media are considered as a key weapon for politics to gain a fame and public attention.
Additionally, TV, newspaper and the online article also bombard with information and advertisements which tempt to change our lifestyle. While it is good to know about other's custom and culture, it also encourages to follow the same culture risking our own. For instance, many Asian people have forgotten to wear their typical ancient dresses following western cultures. Moreover, it also afflicts our way of communication, our language and our believe towards our traditions.
To sum up, the mass media is a spectacular way to spread knowledge and information which directly impact people lifestyle, their behavior, and opinion about others. In my opinion, it induce us to listen to them, follow them and act in a certain way. Therefore, it is recommended to never judge people based on non-verified news sources and one should not blindly follow them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 282.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09219858156 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76842951904 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 139.433497537 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613475177305 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 4.6157635468 217% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.3739380998 50.4703680194 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.571428571 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.25397266985 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291340607856 0.242375264174 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100873112798 0.0925447433944 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081374831713 0.071462118173 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171573290813 0.151781067708 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566994360317 0.0609392437508 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.