There has been a colossal upsurge in the trend to see prodigies discussing the role of education and health sector for having a prosperous society, and which national service among them should receive more financial assistance. While some people believe that the education sector should be prioritised over health, others with the opinion that the health sector should equally be treated with the education sector. There are strong merits to both sides of the arguments; however, I opine to believe that public health is crucial, which needs to be a top priority, and shall discuss the reasons in the following essay before reaching to the plausible conclusion.
Although it’s an irrefutable fact that education and health are fundamental pillars for any thriving society, some people believe education must be preferred over public health when it comes to financial support. Education plays a significant role in the evolving society, and it needs constant support of financial as well as the help of educators. A good education can help a nation to thrive and change the economic circumstance of the nation.
Another pivotal facet of the argument that a good public health infrastructure helps a country to survive and thrive, irrespective of the challenges that the country is facing. People argue that if an individual is in good health, then only he can look for education. As an illustration, remarkable research from the prestigious university asserted that the health sector is the most financial deficient in most of the countries around the globe, and due to which countries are facing various national issue.
To recapitulate, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that both sectors, education and health are crucial for any society. However, I believe that the public health sector should be given preference, and the government should implement a policy where public health infrastructure should be a top priority.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, then, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 5.94088669951 252% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 5.75862068966 278% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1207.87684729 136% => OK
No of words: 308.0 242.827586207 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31493506494 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83847762368 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503246753247 0.580463131201 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.9 379.143842365 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.931034482759 537% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.8842490885 50.4703680194 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.818181818 104.977214359 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.9669160288 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 7.25397266985 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310758419944 0.242375264174 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124576645483 0.0925447433944 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821461976902 0.071462118173 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186146504483 0.151781067708 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790962978029 0.0609392437508 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 12.6369458128 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 53.1260098522 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 55.0591133005 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.94827586207 181% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.5123152709 171% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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