Parents should be held legally responsible for their children’s acts. What is your opinion?
Parents play vital role in shaping future of children. Should they be held responsible legally responsible for their wards? In my opinion yes, as this will help in bringing down crimes, addressing issues at early years of child’s development.
Firstly, Good parenting is very important. Parents spent most of the time with their children during their early years of age. They provide them ecosystem to develop, understand things in life. If parents can ingest good habits like respecting others, value of life and communal harmony then they will grow to become good citizens. Due to fast paced life parents are not doing their part and expect schools and teachers to play their roles in children’s life. If we can enforce legal responsibility on parents then will start paying more attention to their children.
Secondly, it is believed that most of the juvenile criminals have background. It may be family issues or friends. It is very important for parents to realize at early stage of child’s development so that bad habits should be not continued. If they think that they are not able to address these then we have government agencies and NGOs to help. Bring your child to these agencies. They have experience in dealing cases of all sort. By doing this parents will be able to fix most of the issues during early ages.
Parents should not encourage child for any wrong act. It may be when he stole something from school, party you attended, driving before legal age or DUI – driving under influence. Enforcing legal responsibility on parents when their child commits crime will also have psychological impact on parents and their child. He will know my parents will be detained if I do this. Also parents will be stricter in terms of monitoring child and his activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 6.10837438424 246% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 20.9802955665 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 301.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97342192691 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64584517371 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 139.433497537 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564784053156 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 12.6551724138 166% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7506831203 50.4703680194 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.2857142857 104.977214359 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 20.9669160288 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 7.25397266985 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372875717168 0.242375264174 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111440021258 0.0925447433944 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105840926534 0.071462118173 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246306275238 0.151781067708 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0868341811861 0.0609392437508 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 12.6369458128 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 53.1260098522 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.9458128079 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.94827586207 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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