Positive And Negative Effects Of Technology Information Through Mass Media
In this modern era, many masses using the mass media technology.The importance of mass media which was always debatable has now becomr more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. The substanial influences of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent year. In my opinion, the former preposition appears to be more rational. This eassy will further elaborate, the positive and negative effect of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
First of all, there are a lot of reasons which will further explain this arguments but the most salient one is that mass media is very beneficial for people because they provide the many information. Another pivotal aspects of this trends is that people can use easily and conversation to other people. Needless to say, all these merits stand in a good stead.
However, there are some pitfalls that negate these arguments and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influences of this trend but one of the most alarming one is that some adds are promote the drugs and people try this this drugs that is very harmful their life. Hence, it is apperent why many against this trend.
According to the arguments aforementioned above can ona reach a conclusion that the benefits of mass media are instrumental indeed. Nevertheless, its potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: The
... masses using the mass media technology.The importance of mass media which was alwa...
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Suggestion: these
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Suggestion: much; little
...ial for people because they provide the many information. Another pivotal aspects of...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much information', 'a good deal of information'.
Suggestion: much information; a good deal of information
...ial for people because they provide the many information. Another pivotal aspects of this trends...
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...information. Another pivotal aspects of this trends is that people can use easily an...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'promoted'.
Suggestion: promoted
...most alarming one is that some adds are promote the drugs and people try this this drug...
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...ds are promote the drugs and people try this this drugs that is very harmful their life. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, thus, while, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1198.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 234.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11965811966 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69968126083 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.3318400503 50.4703680194 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.909090909 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2727272727 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72727272727 7.25397266985 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140478706247 0.242375264174 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471378769641 0.0925447433944 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603454918689 0.071462118173 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0852577657807 0.151781067708 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569807104423 0.0609392437508 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.