In some countries around the world, voting is compulsory.Do you agree with the notion of compulsory voting?If it is compulsory in a democratic society, what conclusions can we draw about ‘Nature of democracy?’
Compulsory voting in a democratic society is undeniably a controversial topic as it raises a question: how democratic a nation will be with or without compulsory voting. This system has many benefits to the nation if it is implemented in a right manner. In this essay, we will discuss the nature of democracy with few examples of compulsory voting.
Democracy is also known as a Republic, is a governing system where the citizens of the country vote to one of the several parties competing for the President’s position. If only 30% of the people vote then the outcome of the election will be unfair, as those who did not vote may not like the party that won the election. For instance, In America, Bill Clinton won when mere 34% of the total population voted. Similarly in India on an average, only 50 to 55% of the people vote and rest have to accept the rules drafted by the unwanted members of the parliament.
Turning to the compulsory casting of the vote, in Australia casting vote is compulsory since last 80 years. Almost 90% of the public participates and there is a little fine for those who don’t participate. Moreover, in South American nations like Peru and Bolivia, there is harsh punitive action against those who don’t vote. For example, Non-Voters are barred from accessing their own bank accounts for up to 3 months. This is the reason there are some people who are against compulsory voting.
In a nutshell it can be said that compulsory casting of a vote is an imperative step in a democratic society, however, its implication in a friendly manner is of vital importance. So compulsory voting is mandatory for a democracy to be a democracy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, similarly, so, then, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 290.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80689655172 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88519118617 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548275862069 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6539018766 50.4703680194 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5714285714 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.25397266985 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315293360565 0.242375264174 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106750713334 0.0925447433944 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756730807628 0.071462118173 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191886929989 0.151781067708 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385464286325 0.0609392437508 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 12.6369458128 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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