Some people believe that academic subjects such as chemistry, physics, and history should be taught in schools, while others believe that students will derive more benefit from studying practical subjects, such as motor mechanics and cooking.
In today's competitive world education plays an eminent role among the people. some people are of the opinion that academic subjects tought from schools plays a pivotal role takes an important role , whereas others believe practical subjects weigh more demand for future benefits. this essay will discuss why academic subjects take an important role rather than practical subjects.
To begin with, studying in school bring a child forward by encouraging them to grow with their specific skills. these versatile characters become fruitful by proper guidance and training under a experts or a teacher. In addition, studying specific subjects such as chemistry, mathematics and physics help to gain more knowledge and uplift them to a better profession">professional choice based on their theoretical and practical knowledge they can improve their skill and reach at their goals. Every profession needs both theoretical and practical skills. For instance, only with practical ability can not fight in this profession">professional world especially, in medical or in engineering fields. so, studying basic subjects in schools can help the people to gain more knowledge and advanced growth in profession">professional life.
On the other hand , some people are arguing that practical subjects can help the people to inthe future. But these can help them somehow only in some field of profession where theoretical knowledge takes a less role such as in cooking or in construction fields. Moreover, thier chances of survival is less with limited scope as they are not aware about the scientific theory behind the work they are doing.
In conclusion, the demand of academic sujects outweigh than practical knowledge. Because in this profession">professional world all are looking for the qualificationa nd the number of degrees that we are earned in our life than the skills. So, in my opinion, schools should get more priority than practical subjects to find a better employment and professional growth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, so, whereas, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1725.0 1207.87684729 143% => OK
No of words: 309.0 242.827586207 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58252427184 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.94404153796 2.71678728327 145% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543689320388 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.0 379.143842365 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6749061998 50.4703680194 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.06666666667 7.25397266985 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202693316982 0.242375264174 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684841504526 0.0925447433944 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654228449563 0.071462118173 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120377696636 0.151781067708 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040305727708 0.0609392437508 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 12.6369458128 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 11.5310837438 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.