Some people believe laws change human behavior. Do you agree with it?
Government enforces several rules and regulations so as to maintain profound and efficient order among the people. These specific guidelines are enforced using laws that governs the way people are going to behave and act under certain circumstances. Such specific instructions when inculcated in the daily routine and lifestyle, can have immense impact in the behaviour of the humans.
From several psychological studies, it is established that consequences does affect human behaviour. For instance, there are quite strict traffic laws in several countries like New Zealand as compared to India. Due to this, Indian drivers tends to jump traffic lights, switch lanes and involve in several road rages. Now, as government is becoming more proactive, they have introduced more restrictive rules with immense penalties. As a consequence of this, more and more people are now inclined in following laws as they don't want to suffer any negative implications.
In addition to this, consequential fear among humans will tend to make them more amiable towards the laws. As laws introduces such fears - fear of money loss, fear of getting detained or losing licence, or destroying career due to uncontrolled anger. Because of these fears, humans tends to behave and align themselves with the process of how laws want them to act. Also, these laws doesn't stop people from exercising their freedom rights or enjoying tours. They are just there so that people can grow, develop and progress in a very efficient and acceptable manner by maintaining just the right order.
Hence, laws have great role in molding the behaviour of humans. They are the standards that people have to accept and indulge in their daily life. They are the regulations by which we, as people can come together as one for better and more prosperous society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, as to, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 295.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21016949153 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68083850458 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579661016949 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.6736266866 50.4703680194 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.0625 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4375 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3125 7.25397266985 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147375490309 0.242375264174 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493467299294 0.0925447433944 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345576185031 0.071462118173 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0880169783154 0.151781067708 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317077219013 0.0609392437508 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.