Education is the key to success and higher education has proven to be a mean to get the better jobs. While some people believe that purpose of the higher education is to prepare the students for the employment others think that higher education is a crucial phase in the life of students where they learns advanced skills. This essay discuss how the higher education is being abused and has become employment centric.
Many students of the modern world are opting for the higher education with the intent of begging a well paid job at the end of the course. Many of them opt to study any subjects irrespective of their area of interest. This is leading to a rat race situation and many students are rushing to study in the field which fetches them a highly paid job. For example, many students in India take admission in wide range of courses in Indian and foreign universities without having any background in the chosen specialization.
A good job after completing the higher education has convinced us to go for master degrees. It beats the entire purpose of the higher education and create a system of rat race. Universities and colleges are focusing on placing the students in good companies rather than giving them the quality education. Infact, some universities even bribe the recruitment teams to provide jobs to the students.
Higher education help us to learn the advance skills enable us to build in depth understanding of the subjects. Not only it remunerate the students by making them eligible for better employment but also enrich their knowledge and skills. Hence higher education shall be used with the intent of learning and not just by focusing on future employment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 300, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'learn'
Suggestion: learn
...hase in the life of students where they learns advanced skills. This essay discuss how...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed and has become employment centric. Many students of the modern world are op...
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Line 7, column 125, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'remunerates'?
Suggestion: remunerates
...erstanding of the subjects. Not only it remunerate the students by making them eligible fo...
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Line 7, column 239, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...also enrich their knowledge and skills. Hence higher education shall be used with the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, well, while, for example, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 5.75862068966 330% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 287.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91637630662 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64441337436 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529616724739 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 446.4 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9873116689 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.785714286 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 7.25397266985 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206097988025 0.242375264174 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717282584123 0.0925447433944 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588544965728 0.071462118173 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128913629418 0.151781067708 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710852867116 0.0609392437508 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 12.6369458128 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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