Some people think that Books are losing as a source of information and entertainment. Do you agree or disagree?
Although books are a great source of information and entertainment but with the technological advancement, it is losing it’s important. I strongly accord with the given statement. This essay will cater you necessary arguments before jumping to conclusion that why books are losing importance as information and entertainment.
To begin with, currently, in the technological era, people are being less dependent on books as a source of information. The invention of the internet has changed the way people gain knowledge because of easy access to the internet. In the past books were the only source of information but now with the ease of internet people can access any information anytime from where he wants to access. To exemplify this, as per the recent survey by the Oxford University, it shows that around 90% of people access the internet for not only for information but for entertainment too.
Going ahead, Apart from gaining information and entertainment from books, there are other ways to get it in a free or rather very cheap way. Currently, people are also moving their focus to other types of entertainment like sport, photography, yoga, meditation, and what not. By following this one can achieve mindfulness and become fit and fine. For example, as per survey by the local news channel, they find that people are now participating more and more to yoga and meditation activities in today’s fast life so that they are free from stress and anxiety.
From the abovementioned points, it clear that the importance of books is fading away in today’s time with the invention of the world wide web and people are moving to pick out other types of entertainment as a result.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, apart from, for example, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 5.75862068966 347% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 281.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08185053381 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99864248276 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544483985765 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 446.4 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3473352489 50.4703680194 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.25397266985 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221455060203 0.242375264174 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838490731962 0.0925447433944 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076062062643 0.071462118173 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136608645237 0.151781067708 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0865539536635 0.0609392437508 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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