Some people like using work by hand. Others prefer using machines.

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Some people like using work by hand. Others prefer using machines.

In modern era, there are myriad things in the world which have been produced either using by help of machines or hand manual. Some individuals believe to work by hand manualing and others prefer using machineries. So, I will discuss both the reasons with an exmple in my further paragraphs.

To begin with, some individuals believe that the manual work is very satisfying work and they get self-confidence. Moreover, they feel they have special skill and ability to do something difference. Second, they also believe that automatics system may be harmful for some works. For instance, everyday the kichen foods make by hand manual with full check the taste of every ingradiene of required spices. Third, people have own experience that there have been done any work by using hand which
always to be proud own self.

On the flip side, other humans prefer that machine gives pure out put quality works. This is the reason, machine is made by fully design with auto system which give to us hundred percentage works. Furthermore, they also excepted that any kinds of work can be possible by using machineries with saving time, energy and cost. Also, in the faster world, the competition level have become amongst producers of every products in the market, and so it can be possible only using advance and fully automated machine which can complete the target of products within a time periods.

To sum-up, every individuals have option to select the best choice to do work by help of using manual or machine. They have different purpose such as some want to get self-satisfaction and proud feel when doing manual work and others have to complete their effective products within a time period which can be possible only through machine.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ndividuals believe that the manual work is very satisfying work and they get self-confidence. More...
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Line 3, column 231, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'automatics'' or 'automatic's'?
Suggestion: automatics'; automatic's
...ference. Second, they also believe that automatics system may be harmful for some works. F...
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Line 3, column 294, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...e harmful for some works. For instance, everyday the kichen foods make by hand manual wi...
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Line 3, column 494, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e been done any work by using hand which always to be proud own self. On the f...
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Line 6, column 172, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...esign with auto system which give to us hundred percentage works. Furthermore, they als...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, so, third, for instance, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 293.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95563139932 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50332863239 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552901023891 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2871854493 50.4703680194 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.714285714 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.25397266985 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26439305023 0.242375264174 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107203982078 0.0925447433944 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119361023138 0.071462118173 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149517686574 0.151781067708 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0994384074923 0.0609392437508 163% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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