There are several advantages to hosting an international sporting event. There are disadvantages too. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
The location of global sports events often results in a competition between nations. Although there are clear downsides for hosting such events, I think the benefits make it attractive.
There are several drawbacks for countries where major sports events take place. Firstly, there is a notable security threat to the host country due to the sudden influx of people from across the globe, which makes it harder to undergo a thorough security check on all of them. Additionally, the venues of the events may be targeted by terrorist groups. Secondly, many fans often choose to use drugs while watching their favorite events. Intoxicated fans could over-react, which may lead to problems such as fights and other illegal actions. Nevertheless, I believe such negative consequences can be overcome by increasing security measures.
In fact I believe hosting sports events that are recognized worldwide bring more benefits than harm. Primarily, the host country undergoes significant financial activities, which boosts the economy. This is mainly due to the tourists coming to watch the events. As a result, local businesses also flourish. These businesses can also leverage their interaction with international costumers by learning about their tastes and preferences. This can help guide their entrepreneurial decisions if they choose to internationalize their business. Moreover, the host country gains significant prestige in the international arena, which also drives more tourists in the future.
In conclusion, I would argue that despite the apparent harmful consequences of hosting international sports events, the benefits of doing so make it a worthy venture.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, while, i think, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 254.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57874015748 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97293107499 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614173228346 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.463112782 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5625 104.977214359 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.875 20.9669160288 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5625 7.25397266985 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139915129193 0.242375264174 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460646038922 0.0925447433944 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472762006395 0.071462118173 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0917875820144 0.151781067708 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0118719912681 0.0609392437508 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 53.1260098522 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 11.5310837438 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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