Violence portrayed on TV and in the movies leads to an increase in crime in our society. People who watch violent movies are more likely to become criminals. Do you agree or disagree.
Nowadays, the violent activities are something which are increasing at a rapid pace in the country, and the suprising factor is that the activities are performed mostly by the common people. Violence movies are the main cause for the people to involve in such deadly activities, and they eventually become criminals. This essay will discuss the reasons why people watching the violent movies have a greater chance to become criminals.
Firstly, the movies portray a clear detail on how to use the equipments or the weapons. As the people watch them with interest, they get a clear knowledge on how to use the weapons. For instance, the usage of the guns and sharp knives are clearly depicted in almost all hollywood movies. Hence, the movies trigger the interest of using the weapons which leads to the death of several people in the society.
Also, the people get a good idea on how to implement the crime. The plan to execute the crime can be drawn with the help of the movies. For example, the Sherlock Homes movies give the important detail on how to execute a crime, and how to escape from it. However, it is upto the people to select the movies to watch.There are several kinds of movies which provides a great knowledge. To sum up, the movies are the main medium by which the people get an idea to execute the criminal plan but this behaviour of watching violent movies can be changed if people change their track.
Overall, this essay discussed how the movies provide information on the usage of weapons and criminal plans but how it can also be avoided by the people. In my opinion, people stand a greater chance to become criminals if they prefer to watch the violent movies. In the future, the release of the violent movies should be banned in order to save the human population.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: clear knowledge
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...he people to select the movies to watch.There are several kinds of movies which provi...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'great knowledge'.
Suggestion: great knowledge
... several kinds of movies which provides a great knowledge. To sum up, the movies are the main med...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, so, for example, for instance, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 316.0 242.827586207 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70253164557 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38871861179 2.71678728327 88% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471518987342 0.580463131201 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.9 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 9.0 1.56157635468 576% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0262866992 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0666666667 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.25397266985 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 2.75862068966 435% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310665558777 0.242375264174 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110738588165 0.0925447433944 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666112770793 0.071462118173 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190994428468 0.151781067708 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047776608033 0.0609392437508 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 11.5310837438 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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