Workers and nursed should be paid more? what is your opinion?
The importance certain professionals like workers and nurses should be paid more was always a debatable topic. Many people state that nurses, workers are paid less compared to other professionals. I completely agree with the statement that they should be paid more as they are contributing enormously to society and public. This essay would further elaborate why this professions should get more salary with justifying reasons and thus lead to a plausible conclusion.
Firstly, no one can deny the significance attachment of nurses and workers with the society and to be in public eye isn't easy as it requires great commitment and hard work. Nurses, teachers and workers are vital part of our daily life. Nurses treat a number of injured person and serve the public in terms of health. Yet they receive small fraction of amount. For instance, Nurses and workers work for more than 12 hours a day compared to football players who earn enormous salaries simply by kicking a ball, while nurses earn a part of salary earned by these sports stars.
Secondly, nurses cure patients and they treat them with utmost care and take care of their health. Workers who work for their company and the main reason for companies annual revenue are paid less with no extra benefits. All this people do best things to serve the nation and future of the country. Although, we all know that salary of these are paid by government and it is responsible of government to realize their contribution to country and further the government has to increase the salary of those people.
According to the arguments aforementioned, one can reach out to point that service of these people do have special value and we cannot the ignore the value of nurses and workers in our society. In a nutshell, it is responsibility of government and companies to increase the pay of these workers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 8.36945812808 227% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1207.87684729 128% => OK
No of words: 315.0 242.827586207 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92063492063 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64405378314 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526984126984 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 475.2 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2031927504 50.4703680194 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.333333333 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 7.25397266985 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280886425336 0.242375264174 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913224401113 0.0925447433944 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0921092524705 0.071462118173 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167472801612 0.151781067708 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11506956884 0.0609392437508 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.