Workers and nurses should be paid more? what is your opinion?
Certain professionals like workers and nurses should be paid more was always a debatable topic. Many people state that nurses, workers receive less pay compared to other professions. I completely agree with the statement that they should be paid more as they are contributing enormously to society and public. This essay would further elaborate why this departments should get more salary with justifying reasons and thus lead to a plausible conclusion.
Firstly, no one can deny the significance attachment of nurses and workers with the society and to be in public eye isn't easy as it requires great commitment and hard work. They play an major role in our daily life helping us in some or other form. Nurses treat number of injured person and serve the public in terms of health. Yet they receive small fraction of amount. For instance, these people work for more than 12 hours a day compared to football players who earn enormous salaries simply by kicking a ball, while nurses earn a part of salary earned by these sports stars.
Secondly, nurses cure patients and they treat them with utmost care and take care of their well being. Workers who work for their company are the main reason for companies annual revenue are paid very less with no extra benefits. All these people do best things to serve the nation and future of the country. Although, we all know that salary of these people are paid by government and it is responsible of government to realize their contribution to country and further the government has to take initiatives to increase the salary of those people.
According to the arguments aforementioned, one can reach out to point that service of these people do have special value and we cannot the ignore the value of nurses and workers in our society. In a nutshell, it is responsibility of government and companies to increase the pay of these workers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 8.36945812808 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1207.87684729 130% => OK
No of words: 322.0 242.827586207 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87888198758 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 3.92707691288 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60212311638 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546583850932 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.9 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4717663871 50.4703680194 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.733333333 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234808013556 0.242375264174 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794545481531 0.0925447433944 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0982383041192 0.071462118173 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145865283115 0.151781067708 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10847168028 0.0609392437508 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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