118. Some people enjoy change, and they look forward to new experiences. Others like their lives to stay the same, and they do not change their usual habits. Compare these two approaches to life. Which approach do you prefer? Explain why.

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118. Some people enjoy change, and they look forward to new experiences. Others like their lives to stay the same, and they do not change their usual habits. Compare these two approaches to life. Which approach do you prefer? Explain why.

People have different views toward the issues and subjects. These viewpoints depend on the persons and their knowledge and experiences which absolutely form their characters, habits, and attitudes of individuals. Some people don't want to change their usual habits, on the contrary, other people really feel enjoyable from new chances and events. In my opinion, these kind of thoughts related directly to the person's way of thinking which is the origin of her or his manners.

Some people, including me, are following the new things, occasions, chance, events, and so on. They think that the best thing for them is to face with everything strange, special and even hard. They have realized that lift is nice and valuable with all opportunities that they can take advantage from. For instance, my old sister like me is a kind of persons who are really brave enough to deal with any problems. She herself pursues the difficult situations because she figures out that the hardships of the life makes it worthy for taking breath. In fact, her character based on her thoughts on the life has made her a different person. She could make enormous success in her job by having this attitude. In addition, with regarding to her attempt and prosperity, she is sure that her way is the best and she is place in one level and step upper than others. So, people, including my sister, are trying to explore any new ways and can change those conditions in favor of themselves. If they have usual and routine lives, they definitely feel that they must do something to alter their world.

Other people want to be in a same situation, without any change. They even make attempt that reduce that possibility of facing with unusual things. As a matter of fact, they feel worry and uneasy when they know that they are going to another position and situation. It can be safe to say that this kind of thinking might cause that people reach huge success or properties. But, in all, it depends on the people's habit and view point of their past. For example, somebody who has lost his money through investing in a car company in the past, he will never try to invest in any new companies. They might be more conservative and frightened their future lives. No wonder, people don't see the subjects the same as each other.

In my opinion, people behave based on their thoughts. So, if they think that the various events and condition can be paved their way for making more money, living better, or feeling pleased, they demand all unwarned and unpredictable things. In contrast, if people have negative experiences of the hard and odd situation, they certainly want to stay in a same space.

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Sentence: For instance, my old sister like me is a kind of persons who are really brave enough to deal with any problems.
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